Floundering Heart (poem) by Amor Sabor on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 6, 2012

So many poets liken the sea -- its dark waters, tumultuous waves, deep secrets, seemingly endless -- to the depths of a broken heart and how very effectively and beautifully you've done just that in this poem. "Oh, the frail heart" ~ Best, Elizabeth

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on September 3, 2007

Beautiful, very beautiful poem!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Amor.. I have a mad passion for the sea; water tugs at me.. so your mesmerizing piece here held me completely rapt..oh, how the ocean lends itself to creative imaginings. As often as we, perhaps, turn to this backdrop, you have renewed the genre.. I absolutely love this poem! katy xox.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Beautiful Amor! Oh the heart does take such a battering doesn't it.
Bill

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

Masterpiece Amor!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

oh i don't know what to say......ok......EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wow.......this is so true!!! elegant and painful......but so true!
pax
A

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on October 26, 2003

as always, lovely work

Reviewed by L M (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Masterful write Amor.

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Intensely felt work, TY!

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Masterfully done!! Excellent imagery!!
Jenni

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Lovely work, and I am glad it is fiction. [grin]

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

A tapestry of talent�as always amazing work�ty, Dani

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Amor -
I have always loved reading your work. Your passion and romance always shine through. I truly loved this one - one so many can relate to. You've captured the emotions so well.
Namaste' my friend;
Melanie

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

An effective and powerful metaphorical piece.

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

"as passion and intimacy become floating debris"----that is so profound. Your images are always so detailed as a painter with a brush! Multi-talented! Anyone that has not seen your artwork should visit your personal site as well ;) Outstanding writing --applause!

Thank You,
Teresa Emilie

Reviewed by Lee Garrett

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Very nice, my friend.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Great capture of the difficult path of the true heart.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Amor you think of the most eloquent and creative phrases, I love your thoughts, that translate to this stunning poetry!

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

"The heart has always been a ship on the waters
venturing out when there is no land in sight"

What a stunning line and so so true. Your pen is like a calm wave floating effortlessly over the sea.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

Oh Amor this just touched me so much...so so lovely...so so sad..and I can relate to it...fantastic writing my friend...floria

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 25, 2003

So painful, grasps the heart with deep emotion. Beautiful as always Amor.