The day leaves behind its precious silhouette
The sun etches its smile upon our faces
The sensual warmth it gives our bodies bare
as shadows make love in the cool green grass
Spontaneously dancing to the tune of our souls
and to the soft music of Debussy in our hearts
It is there that death does not come to visit
for at no other time are we more alive
It is in the light rain of a soft reverie
our bodies entwined around each other
over and over under the diminishing light
modestly without shame in the eyes of the world
As angels through windows of passing clouds
look out at us and smile quite contented
it is our paradise with only one life to live
knowing that today may never come again
The shadows of love engraved in our hearts…
passion continuously reinvented in our eyes…
if there is a chance for professing our love
then there will be no risk of losing tomorrow
Oooooooh, this glides like melting chocolate on the tongue. So smooth and delicious! So many wonderful lines, it's impossible to choose just one. But (for different reasons), I especially like this:
"as shadows make love in the cool green grass"
I so enjoy reading you. As always, wonderful work!
Tami
Your poetry is very compelling and quite lovely on the lips, lingering in the mind. I will read them all.
A fellow poet(or should I say a "female" poet?) Oh, well, you know what I mean.
Patsy Lewis
Touching write Amor...this moved me..
The shadows of love engraved in our hearts…
passion continuously reinvented in our eyes…
if there is a chance for professing our love
then there will be no risk of losing tomorrow
Heartfelt piece Sir!!
Love Tinka
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
Incredibly beautiful, Amor.
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
Romance himself..you have a gift for turning heads Amor...Making people hungry for more..Excellent poem ty, Dani
Amor, you are the master of romantic accolades. There is none any better at it than you. Sensually soft and caring. Lisa
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
Need to nickname you "Mr. Romance", you are the best at these.
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
"Spontaneously dancing to the tune of our souls
and to the soft music of Debussy in our hearts
It is there that death does not come to visit
for at no other time are we more alive "
OH Amor..this spoke to me..I read it over and over...you are so talented...floria
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
Real love always brings brighter days
excellent as always Amor.......
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
Breath taking! You speak with the poetlic voice of passion. Your words are as brilliant as the paint you use on your canvas. I am always impressed with your work!
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2003
The shadows of love engraved in our hearts…
passion continuously reinvented in our eyes…
if there is a chance for professing our love
then there will be no risk of losing tomorrow
Well said Amor..well said...
excellent erite...ty
Vesna
then there will be no risk of losing tomorrow"
Says it all for me. I take chances, because if I dont, It is a potential waste waiting to occur.
SO very insightful Amor, and real! ;)
Ch'erie
"as shadows make love in the cool green grass"
I so enjoy reading you. As always, wonderful work!
Tami
A fellow poet(or should I say a "female" poet?) Oh, well, you know what I mean.
Patsy Lewis
Rodd
Marlene
Enjoyed reading this...
Trixie :)
What can I say that the others haven't?
Ummmm breathtaking, deep and sensual!
Always a pleasure to read you!
Hugs,
Maria
in our hearts..." is a great line.
Marilyn
Reindeer
The shadows of love engraved in our hearts…
passion continuously reinvented in our eyes…
if there is a chance for professing our love
then there will be no risk of losing tomorrow
Heartfelt piece Sir!!
Love Tinka
peace
Justin
and to the soft music of Debussy in our hearts
It is there that death does not come to visit
for at no other time are we more alive "
OH Amor..this spoke to me..I read it over and over...you are so talented...floria
excellent as always Amor.......
The shadows of love engraved in our hearts…
passion continuously reinvented in our eyes…
if there is a chance for professing our love
then there will be no risk of losing tomorrow
Well said Amor..well said...
excellent erite...ty
Vesna