I would make a pilgrimage to your dear heart
as deep as the ocean by the insistent moon
to sway with your hips under dancing palms
as I rise to you in a tide of liquid amber flames
There we feel the warm sand between our toes
as we promenade along these sugared shores
Day is overcast but your smile is the shining sun
turning the night into day and the day into night
and the warm pacific breeze embraces us again
for you have caught me in the net of your desires
Your eyes tell a story of complete contentment
as they dance about in a liquid gold sunset
Your bare shoulders throw caution to the wind
Your sensual form wrapped in a pineapple tan
Your candy apple lips draw me to taste you
with kisses sweeter than fields of sugar cane
You lead me to your never-ending horizon
and it is there where we practice our religion
to make love under a cerulean ocean of stars
and we sleep in the constellations of dreams
And it is only here in this tropical paradise
where our merciful gods continue to exist
where all of the miracles of life dare reside
where even in twilight love can never subside
This is really beautiful, Amor. Tiana must feel quite loved after reading this tribute to her. The imagery is so inviting and serene, just the setting for love in its most glorious and pure state. Well done, Poet! ~~BonnieQ
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2004
to make love under a cerulean ocean of stars
and we sleep in the constellations of dreams
...glorious...an exhaltation of love...passion,sensual expression of a heart that knows how to touch a woman...the splendour of your Being graces AD..ty for your presence..
Amor,
Exotic sweets to the sweet you have written here...
Such a romantic heart and spirit you have.
Tiana, my island sister is a wonderful lady
Marilyn
Couldn't be dedicated to a finer, more deserving person, Amor! She will love this; I sure did!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
Amor she will be thrilled with this lovely work....
You have many admirers sir Poet...lovely expression..
floria
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
A beautiful tribute to a Lady from paradise. Words we express never seem to be adequate for her. You have set the pace and others will rise to the challenge I know. Great poem. Bill
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on February 20, 2004
This is such a wonderful tribute for a wonderful lady!
Beautiful passionate dedication to Tiana! I really enjoy her spirit and her writes :-) As usual, you have written the essence of another extremely well. Great write!
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and we sleep in the constellations of dreams
...glorious...an exhaltation of love...passion,sensual expression of a heart that knows how to touch a woman...the splendour of your Being graces AD..ty for your presence..
vesna
Exotic sweets to the sweet you have written here...
Such a romantic heart and spirit you have.
Tiana, my island sister is a wonderful lady
Marilyn
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
You have many admirers sir Poet...lovely expression..
floria
You just know how to make them eat right out of your heart...lol!!
Love Tinka
(((Honi-Honi)));-)
a wonderful poetess...
Trixie :)