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Churned up id'...or...'Stewing!'
by Kay P M- Devenish → (All Poetry by Kay P M- Devenish)
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Dropping into stomach pit
my id
sinks
D
E
E
P,
churned to be
h e a v i l y

S T E W E D

until
I...


S
l
e
e
p.




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 Reviews of "Churned up id'...or...'Stewing!'"
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Reviewed on January 20, 2005
Kay,

Wonderfully creative piece - penned to perfection ... enjoyed!!


Best wishes,

Robert
Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on July 28, 2004
Creative and unique Kay.... very nice

Peter Paton
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on July 20, 2004
Nuffin like a good nights kip eh :):)
Like the format here Kay.
Hugs
Ch'erie
Reviewed by Cynthia Castle (Reader)
Reviewed on July 20, 2004
A unique write! Like the style, Dear Poet! ...Usually feel better after we "sleep on it!"

Cynthia
Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on July 18, 2004
Very creative.
Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2004
That's a real interesting write.
Enjoyed this one - and I like the photo in your bio.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2004
This is creative Kay!!!!!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2004
Interesting form :-)
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 17, 2004
I don't want to sleep too much...missing too much!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 17, 2004
after stewing our id a good sleep is helpful to digest its latent juices ... unniqe write ...
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2004
Life’s too short to sleep…lol!!!… I take powernaps!!!… I liked the format of this write, Kay!!!… Well-done Poet!!!
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on July 17, 2004
When we say: tomorrow will be another day, we're not kidding. A good night's rest has a way of putting things into perspective.

Carmen :-)
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on July 17, 2004
Got to have that sleep don't we...
Love ya!
Smoooooooooooooooo0000000000Ch!
Nighty, night, night!
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 17, 2004
Interesting poem, Kay. Hope your sleep was a restful one.
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