GET UP you're not dead yet. (poem) by Kay P M- Devenish on AuthorsDen

GET UP you're not dead yet.
by Kay P M- Devenish → (All Poetry by Kay P M- Devenish)
Sunday, July 28, 2024 Rated "PG13" by the Author.

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My one and only attempt at Rap song lyrics.Excuse the slang but it seems to belong in Rap songs.

Get up your not dead yet, get up,get ready,get set, move your butt and take that step, be strong enough to just forget, take the step you wont regret. All you seem to do is think of you, staying in your room, wrapped up in your gloom sinking in your doom, have you really ever tried, not to act like you have died? You're livin' with a sink of dishes lookin' like someone suspicious, lookin' like a slob... Go and get a friggin' job!!! Here I am take my hand all I want is YOU to STAND AND GET UP,you're not dead yet, get up,get ready,get set, whatever it is that holds you down there, you could escape it IF you just dare to GET UP and crack a smile, fake it if you need to for a while, the difference that it makes, helps you to get the breaks, mends your past mistakes, gives the courage that it takes to GET UP from feeling down, keeps you free from wearin' a frown, an' from arsein' around, lying on the groun'. Sure they broke your heart, tore your dreams apart, inticeing you to depart. and never have the heart to GET UP. Yeh you found out that they cheated, so you're feelin' so defeated, you're so bloody sad, an' thats makin' me so friggin' mad. GET UP...you're NOT dead yet, get up,get ready,get set, one day you WILL die and that's a bet, and it's no lie I'd be upset, so GET UP, don't just rot in that spot, GET UP from the friggin' blues, kick that crap away and choose to stop all the boo-who-whoose, since they left it's all you do stop crying for that piece of poo their no better than your spew, Soooo...this is what you need to do... Get up ,you're not dead yet, get up ...get ready... get set, don't stay in your room soaked in tears, under a tomb covered with fears, they kicked you in the bum, an' treated you like scum, so,get up now, chew some gum, time to stop at suckin' your thumb you're driven' me insane.. JUST LET GO OF your pain, and GET UP from the floor 'cause I can't take it anymore!!!! Get Up You're Not dead yet. move your butt...get ready,get set, GET UP YOU"RE NOT DEAD... YET !!!!!

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on September 6, 2024

OH KAY....WHAT A STRONG PIECE! CERTAINLY ENCOURAGING AND FORCEFUL!!! I ENJOYED IT VERY MUCH AND I HAVE NO DOUBT THAT ANY FORLORN OR DOWNHEARTED INDIVIDUAL WHO IS STUCK IN THE MUD OF LIFE, WILL READ THIS WORK AND WILL.... GET UP!!!!! THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...HIS+INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on August 13, 2024

A message all of us need at times. Well penned and much enjoyed this encouragement, Kay.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on July 29, 2024

I love it! Especially your choice of words and letting them fly. The only one you missed was� Get going or just plain, go. like get up and go.

Ron

Reviewed by ShyPoet 1

Reviewed on July 28, 2024

WoW - I find this to be the most inspirational poem I have ever read. I know you won't understand why, but it is just what I need, needed. Thank you so much ...

And, thank you for hour review.