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Shhhuuuu.
by Kay P M- Devenish → (All Poetry by Kay P M- Devenish)
  
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Heaven plucked me up

so IT could smell me

with ITS nose

but ...

mortified 

soon 

turned my pride

when  heard  I:

' NOT ...

         a rose!'       

 

 

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 Reviews of "Shhhuuuu."
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on November 10, 2003
wow...clap clap clap!!!!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 9, 2003
What does heaven know anyway? Cleverly expressed.

Reviewed on November 9, 2003
well at least the poem´s a rose

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 9, 2003
LOL cute write.

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on November 9, 2003
lol Well done Kay!

Jack

Reviewed by m w
Reviewed on November 9, 2003
Maybe heaven needs to check its nose. Wonderful wrtie

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on November 9, 2003
That's the good part, isn't it. :) If we smelled like roses, we wouldn't need flowers or perfumes. Very good!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 9, 2003
This is just too damn funny Kay!!

heheheheh!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 9, 2003
Katy matey you are tooooooooo much!;-) You are a rose for sure!Got me laughing this morning, thank you!luv your little people;-)

Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on November 9, 2003
Hi Kay,
This is just too funny...
Just what I needed,
"A real good laugh."


Hugs,
Trixie :)

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on November 9, 2003
Pass me a tissue SOMEBODY! My god, Kay, I'm falling off my chair! How does one review, adequately, something so perfect in its brevity, its hilarity, its universal appeal? I LOVED this! (grin) katy xox.

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on November 9, 2003
I laughed out loud on this one, Kay!
Blessed are they whose nose cannot smell,
For I had a shower, but it's been a spell.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 9, 2003
Hee, hee, I and heavean still love you
SMooooooooooooooo000000000000000CH!
me not smell like flower either.....
uggggh..Love the little hush guy, or girl
who knows anymore?
SMooooooooooooooooo00000000000000CH!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 9, 2003
Well that makes two of us! So creative and funny.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on November 9, 2003
Well Kay, I am not sure I needed to know you don't smell like a rose, LOL! Enjoyed and laughed on this one, thanks for the fun...Peace, ED & Rufuz

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 9, 2003
Hilarious!

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on November 9, 2003
lol
love it!

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on November 9, 2003
wise..witty and just plain funny...LOL!

Great write...

Vesna oxoxo


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