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“Tench hup!”
by Mark M Lichterman → (All Poetry by Mark M Lichterman)
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“Tench hup!”

 

The young man had spent the long hours during the trip

rationalizing his reasons for a four-year enlistment.

 

First off, there were no wars at this time and no one

would be shooting at him.

 

Also,

unless in college he would be eligible for the draft

within the next year and,

really,

the only thing he had been doing in college was taking up space

and  he didn’t know how long he would be able to last there.

 

He further rationalized that after he was through with the service

he would be better prepared for college.

 

Also, maybe he would learn a vocation in the Coast Guard.

 

Other than that,

he had thought about the Coast Guardsmen stationed at the

Randolph Street Lifeboat Station in Chicago Harbor and

the Coast Guard seemed like romantic, adventuresome,

not-too-difficult duty that would bring him into

contact with any number of girls.

 

“Day is gone.

Gone the sun,”

Taps.

The Boatswains Mate threw the switch,

turning the lights of the barracks off.

“from the lake.

from the hills,

from the sky.”

His fingers absently caressing the stubble of his military brush,

lying on his back with his hands behind his head, he listened.

 

From the far end of the camp the mournful sound of the bugle echoed softly…

 then all was quiet.

 

Sad, lonely;

feeling the thickening in his throat and the stinging behind his eyes,

swallowing, he attempted to hold back tears.

 

In Barracks 7 there was the rustle of fifty beds, the breathing of fifty men,

and the muffled sobs of more than just a few.

 

0500

 

Reveille:

“You can’t get’em up,

you can’t get’em up,

you can’t get’em up in the morning!”

 

The bugle that had sounded so mournful playing taps the night before

was now loud and raucous…

just as it was meant to be.

 

“Reveille!”

Walking the aisle between the rows of bunks,

“Reveille!”

Clanging a truncheon from bunk to bunk,

“Reveille!” The Boatswains Mate called,

“Reveille! Drop your cocks and grab your socks!

Reveille!”

 

Jarred awake.

Shove your pee erection back into your two-snap,

 U.S. Government issue skivvies and, holding your towel

and toilet kit in front of your crotch to hide it,

rush to the head.

 

Civilians, the Army and the Air Force have washrooms,

bathrooms and toilets.

The Navy, Marines and Coast Guard have “heads.”

 

Stand before the communal urinal straining against a full bladder,

and as badly as you have to, it seems an eternity until, finally,

red-faced from straining, you do.

 

Wait until there’s an opening in the long row of sinks and brush your teeth,

wash and shave.

 

Uniform of the day: dungarees.

 

Thirty minutes from reveille:

“Fall in!

Hustle!

Fall in outside!”

Wearing pea coats over dungarees,

caps at precisely two finger-widths above their eyebrows;

as they had been taught the day before,

the breath of the fifty boots came in white plumes on the early morning,

frigid air.

 

“Tench hup!”

 Faces red from the cold, stared straight forward.

“Dress right dress!

Tench hup!

Left, face!

Forward, harch!

Hup, two, three, four! Hup, two, three, four!”

 

Chow…

 

 

©October 24, 2011 / Mark M. Lichterman

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "“Tench hup!”"
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on October 25, 2011
Very entertaining as well as I learned quite a bit in reading this, Mark!

Reviewed by Laura Fall
Reviewed on October 25, 2011
My father was in the army and then fought in World War Two as he told me many stories of those days good and bad as this was truly a great write my friend as always well done Laura

Reviewed on October 25, 2011
Mark,

Wonderful poem. A typical day of the soldier and he how he got there in the first place. Adjustment is difficult.

Mary

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on October 25, 2011
Sure wouldn't be the life for me...but Mitchie adapted very well...You made me feel I was right there, Mark....well done...

Anna

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 25, 2011
So many men will be brought back in time by this one and it did stir so many memories. Well done old friend.
fee

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on October 24, 2011
My lotto number was 113. I stayed in school and fortunately Nam was history along with the draft. Looking back, service was a class war and I'm not proud of that. As you learned, the Coast Guard was no picnic. Well done Mark. Patrick


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