I looked into a covered mirror and found the face of mortality staring back at me--Oh, go away!
I feel the weight of all I've yet to be etching my bones like acid tears-- The best of my intentions blaze in the dark-star crucible of fear--
My heart has set a far horizon as the finish line to legacy-- I hope to leave some lasting trace to mark the place I dared be me--
No stone wants to sink beneath the silver liquid just at dawn-- No man wants to fade to black a ghost while living that doesn't belong--
If only heart and mind-- and my spirit's cage-- were equally partnered, glove and fist-- I'd scrawl my vision across the void and make my name a cometary epithet--
Betraying flesh denies desire, and fails ambition's adamant will-- My soul is longing for the hidden country where dreams take flight on wings of steel--
Lee- I like your metaphors how they jump out at you with such intensity! Great very Intense feeling poem, I understand where your heart is at! YOu will leave something of great importance, to the one who needs it most! I like your word usuage in your writings! Warm HuGs! *She*
Lee, this one takes my breath away. To be remembered, to feel like you made a difference...that you left something worthwhile in your wake... I understand all too well.
South Baltimore serves as the backdrop for this gripping story of three brothers leading very different lives but joined forever by the secrets of a painful family past.
Five years have passed. The sequel to the award-winning Chapel of Eternal Love, this book revisits the same couples in the first book, and where the lives have taken them since they left the altar at The Chapel of Eternal Love
Imogene, a country-bred girl, longs to make a life for herself in New York City. She joins forces with her former college roommate to start a movie production company in the big city.
I raised my hand in salute. Respect, acceptance, success, is such a fickle pursuit at times.
"A cometary epithet" Indeed!
Good one ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Mary
"Betraying flesh denies desire, and fails ambitions adamant will--"
an awesome line
speaking of duality fears.
I will climb upon my wings of steel the very next time my mirror tells me of fleeting time, aging body and flagging soul. Excellent write.