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Complimentary Ticket
by D. L. Vegas → (All Poetry by D. L. Vegas)
Tuesday, December 1, 2015    Rated "PG" by the Author.
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I was in the last car
On a train
California Zephyr-
Looking out my window
Anticipating a downpour
I headed for the dining car
Hand on the door handle
Turning it downward
You stood letting your guard down
With your ticket in hand
Looking for your car-
I pointed out
We had connecting sleepers
Your gorgeous eyes said it All... .. .





 

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 Reviews of "Complimentary Ticket"
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on December 2, 2015
I like this adventure sounds like the beginning of a great story!
Peace and love
Amber

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 2, 2015
This could be the theme of the novel or a movie like the Oriental Express. I don't know if you had an occasion to ride the Zephyr or not, but the possibility of a chance meeting and adjoining sleepers certainly sounds exciting and romantic.

I'll be sure to book a passage on a sleeper across the aisle so that I can peek in on your little romantic interlude. ;-)

Ron

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on December 1, 2015
Puts me in mind of a statement that speaks of a "train passing in the night"...just as two people pass between cars on a train...maybe a one night stand, maybe...depends on the two...-e-

Reviewed by Eva Pasco
Reviewed on December 1, 2015
Two strangers on a train, bound together for the duration of the journey. Is it enough?

Your poem allows me the freedom to speculate what may or may not be.

Reviewed on December 1, 2015
What a ride!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on December 1, 2015
Ah, nothing like a friendly encounter with a perfect stranger.


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