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Same Time Tomorrow Part 2 (Short Story) - 7/18/2017 4:39:17 PM
beautifully penned

Same Time Tomorrow Part 2 (Short Story) - 8/25/2016 5:06:23 AM
This one is better. However, sex seems to be the object of the day. Two women starved for attention and willing to give it to one another. Both are willing and able to spend a great deal of time in sexual activity rather than anything else. Most people don't have that luxury, although they may dream about it. But this is a story and the dream can become a reality in a fictional story. Ron

Same Time Tomorrow Part 1 (Short Story) - 8/25/2016 4:59:07 AM
I'm not going to be as kind and generous as Jane. While I certainly like stories like this, yours has a rather bland and simple plot of a straightforward hookup with no romance or mystery at all. In man's terms, "slam, bam, thank you ma'am." And it has nothing to do with the length of the encounter. You missed the end of a sentence after U-Haul [.] And you jumped from present to past tense at one point. Ron

Same Time Tomorrow Part 1 (Short Story) - 7/14/2016 6:01:38 PM
'Sounds like Sam and the woman had a great evening together. In this day and age it's nice to read of lust and love. Fine job, my friend! Love ya! Jane

Shooting From the Hip (Short Story) - 1/11/2011 3:40:25 PM
I have to agree with Fee, and think of all the individuals with different personality disorder's whom went miss diagnosed. Be thankful, you have the answers now. Also, I enjoyed the write. Best wishes to you...

Shooting From the Hip (Short Story) - 1/20/2010 5:00:39 AM
Sadly all too many people were written off, kicked out of families, locked away or worst because so little was known about mental illness. Glad you survived. fee

Recommend: The Courage to Heal (Article) - 6/10/2010 6:13:03 PM
Thank you for sharing this important information. Love and peace to you, Regis

Recommend: The Courage to Heal (Article) - 1/22/2010 10:17:48 AM
Sounds as you suggest like a book we all should read and learn from. fee

A Sweet Whisper (Poetry) - 12/16/2025 2:49:44 PM
This was a thoughtful and engaging piece. I enjoyed the flow and the perspective you shared.

A Broom is not Just for Sweeping (Poetry) - 8/19/2024 9:33:50 PM
This Poem makes you to think that there are always 2 side of every story So thoughtful Poem . It made me to think. Thank you putting in your interesting and curious words.

A Woman's Hands (Poetry) - 10/21/2017 12:19:29 AM
nice lyric quality, never stop writing! m

Physically Yours (Poetry) - 9/20/2017 1:22:03 PM
Never heard a woman announcing to be there for someone else. Always wanted to but never had the encounter. Nice to meet you D.L.Vegas, You are beautiful Cheers ! Rana

Another Season (Poetry) - 8/12/2017 1:59:56 PM
elegant!

Another Season (Poetry) - 8/5/2017 6:34:39 AM
and it's "Falling" fast.

Another Season (Poetry) - 8/4/2017 10:17:50 PM
Want winter? Just give Fall a few days to pass...-e-

Another Season (Poetry) - 8/4/2017 5:33:52 PM
Lotta legs dere. Yes! Fall into another season for sure.

Love Affair (Poetry) - 8/4/2017 4:01:32 PM
Less words will leave more for the imagination. Nicely done!

Love Affair (Poetry) - 8/3/2017 2:53:22 PM
Nce work if you can get it!

Constant Changes (Poetry) - 8/3/2017 1:31:07 PM
A very observent poem, Deborah.

Constant Changes (Poetry) - 8/3/2017 5:11:49 AM
Change is the only constant. I always described love as starting out as burning flames, and then becoming embers.

Capacity . ... .. . (Poetry) - 7/31/2017 10:46:24 AM
Sensual and loving, a fine combination... ;) Love and best wishes, Regis

Physically Yours (Poetry) - 7/29/2017 6:50:23 PM
I am going to put your words to the test. I'll let you know the outcome...

Physically Yours (Poetry) - 7/29/2017 12:56:14 PM
It's also true the other way around. I wanna be seduced.

Capacity . ... .. . (Poetry) - 7/29/2017 12:27:40 PM
Pull up a chair this one is a sizzler.

Physically Yours (Poetry) - 7/29/2017 12:24:01 PM
I hope not.

Physically Yours (Poetry) - 7/29/2017 10:57:57 AM
The man who loves is a happy man. The man who seeks sex, never gets what he really wants. Ron

Lonely Lady (Poetry) - 7/27/2017 12:11:28 PM
poignant read

Lonely Lady (Poetry) - 7/27/2017 7:39:30 AM
Warm, generous poem...thank you!

Lonely Lady (Poetry) - 7/26/2017 2:13:07 AM
short but beautiful, thanks for sharing, and have a great day, D>L. xo

Lonely Lady (Poetry) - 7/25/2017 9:41:49 AM
Home is where the heart is. Just a cliché I had to say. It is interesting how some people can discern what is and others' minds. Ron

Lonely Lady (Poetry) - 7/25/2017 7:35:59 AM
sweet loved it

Lonely Lady (Poetry) - 7/25/2017 7:17:20 AM
Ahhh . . .That's where her hand should go.

Instantly (Poetry) - 7/23/2017 6:14:15 AM
I probably would, too. But be rejected because I was not of the right gender. ;-) Ron

Capacity . ... .. . (Poetry) - 7/22/2017 7:41:00 AM
Love is everything.

Twilight Flowering (Poetry) - 7/19/2017 4:02:51 PM
written nicely

Behind a Closed Door (Poetry) - 7/19/2017 4:02:30 PM
nice

Behind a Closed Door (Poetry) - 7/19/2017 1:48:41 PM
Yep, gotta get in the right position, don't ya know?

We Are the Only Two (Poetry) - 7/19/2017 10:42:23 AM
Count me in. That makes three.

We Are the Only Two (Poetry) - 7/18/2017 4:39:43 PM
breath taking

We Are the Only Two (Poetry) - 7/18/2017 9:31:36 AM
It sure is wonderful to feel that way. But we all have to get back to breathing, drinking, eating and shelter from our nakedness in the cold or too hot sun. Still, it is these interludes that make life worthwhile. Ron

We Are the Only Two (Poetry) - 7/18/2017 7:41:25 AM
I remember that "Only two left on Earth" feeling. Nothing like it.

Twilight Flowering (Poetry) - 7/17/2017 11:00:05 AM
Nicely put!

She & I (Poetry) - 7/16/2017 3:17:03 PM
If she chose you, then she IS MOST CERTAINLY a very wise young lady, just like you...-e-

She & I (Poetry) - 7/16/2017 11:17:47 AM
Very revealing and honest. You not only love this woman, you will honor her with your praise. Ron

She & I (Poetry) - 7/13/2017 5:22:31 PM
Happens to us all I'm thinking, Deborah, at least it has for me.

Caught (Poetry) - 7/13/2017 4:47:07 AM
and they keep turning into eachother contiually

Caught (Poetry) - 7/12/2017 5:05:55 AM
There's a metaphor here that reminds me of that famous song, "The days grow short… those autumn leaves began to fall." Ron

Caught (Poetry) - 7/11/2017 9:59:48 AM
We're living through those"Summer storms" as we speak . . . er . . . type.

For the Want of Her (Poetry) - 7/10/2017 7:53:30 AM
Be careful what you want. You might get it. Somehow I find that "going where one has never gone" may often be going too far. Ron

For the Want of Her (Poetry) - 7/9/2017 5:03:09 PM
I love your positive thoughts, and yes, she is out there for you, Deborah.

Women Who Love Women (Poetry) - 7/8/2017 12:59:14 PM
Jerry, Women are more emotional...

Women Who Love Women (Poetry) - 7/8/2017 12:44:24 PM
"Only women can fully understand" I've been hearing that phrase most of my life. And it stands to reason that when women have "that feeling" that only women can understand. I agree. So what? When men have "that feeling" only men can understand. Stalemate.

Summer Days (Poetry) - 7/7/2017 8:59:59 AM
Warm waters are certainly sensual. Especially if shared. Ron

Summer Days (Poetry) - 7/7/2017 6:46:46 AM
Finding that coolness is when things heat up.

Summer Days (Poetry) - 7/6/2017 11:02:16 AM
I can just picture it!

Together Now (Poetry) - 7/5/2017 4:34:14 PM
. . . and a wild journey it will be my friend . . .

Raw (Poetry) - 6/29/2017 6:12:22 PM
Like the name and last word of this one, it says it all...-e-

Raw (Poetry) - 6/27/2017 8:07:00 AM
My favorite view as well! Just call me a believer.

Raw (Poetry) - 6/27/2017 7:47:22 AM
Just so it will heal afterward… Ron

Raw (Poetry) - 6/26/2017 6:42:25 AM
Cool, crisp poem and to the point. Great work!

Raw (Poetry) - 6/26/2017 3:59:26 AM
Yup, last line captures everything and lays it on thick.

Raw (Poetry) - 6/26/2017 3:08:57 AM
in the begining

Night Whispers (Poetry) - 6/13/2017 11:32:43 AM
Ah, what in the world would we do without our night whispers?

Night Whispers (Poetry) - 6/13/2017 9:36:14 AM
I remember, but we are both too exhausted from burning life at both ends, going to bed too late and getting up too early to even wake up and whisper. Maybe soon… Ron

Night Whispers (Poetry) - 6/12/2017 11:04:10 AM
Evocative. But they don't have to be night whispers, my wife behaves better now but in her younger days had a habit of waking me at the crack of dawn with those whispers.

Night Whispers (Poetry) - 6/11/2017 2:07:30 PM
Night whispers in my ear, all the sweet nothings, I love to hear.

In Demand (Poetry) - 6/9/2017 7:10:09 AM
Love is like that. All encompassing, sometimes all-consuming. Ron

It Changes (Poetry) - 6/8/2017 1:36:08 PM
it usual does, sometimes sad to say, sometimes it becomes so much deeper

All the Right Curves (Poetry) - 6/7/2017 2:32:29 AM
My wife still has curves. I do not! LOL

All the Right Curves (Poetry) - 6/6/2017 7:32:56 AM
Some people have them, some don't. You made me recall that time on the beach in San Francisco. A hippie couple was trying to get some sun there (impossible after 4 PM when the fog rolls in). She was a skinny blonde, deeply tanned that had a curve of her hip that made me wish I was that lucky guy with her. Curves can do that to you. Ron

All the Right Curves (Poetry) - 6/6/2017 6:04:31 AM
Over the years, her curves have rounded, as she put on weight, but I still love her, and think she's great. Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder.

All the Right Curves (Poetry) - 6/5/2017 3:32:00 AM
every part of one we love should be worshipped, I so agree

In the Beginning. . . (Poetry) - 6/4/2017 1:34:40 PM
yes in the beginning and if we are very lucky, to the end

A Natured Relationship (Poetry) - 6/3/2017 6:58:03 AM
I love the Fall as well! The fall foliage is such a splendor, a sudden riot of color, the air is cooler with a tincture of earthiness, time for a good book, hot cocoa, pumpkin pie, warm soups and cozy evenings with that significant other. Umm, love is...Everything! I truly loved your poem! Debbie

We, America (Poetry) - 6/2/2017 6:16:22 AM
The stupid obsession with biblical views designed thousands of years ago as some sort of "protection" from evil must be stamped out with the truth. Even if we have to immerse them, kicking and screaming into the reality of life, we must do it. We must educate those with dumbed down minds. Who wants to live in the Old Testament way? Ron

We, America (Poetry) - 6/2/2017 5:44:05 AM
Short and to the point, and with our current administration, that ugliness feels free to express itself.

We, America (Poetry) - 6/2/2017 3:01:43 AM
in depth meaning in so few lines, well done

We, America (Poetry) - 6/1/2017 11:48:19 PM
A short but deep meaningful poem. Best wishes always to you and yours from Kay

We, America (Poetry) - 6/1/2017 5:49:03 PM
I AGREE, BUT THEN...WE ARE IN THE END TIMES AND CAN EXPECT THAT EXACTLY WHAT THE WORD OF GOD SAID WOULD HAPPEN, WILL HAPPEN. BUT IN SPITE OF OUR SELFISHNESS AND OUR INABILITY TO LOVE EACH OTHER AS WE SHOULD, GOD, WITH HIS MARVELOUS MERCY AND GRACE 'STILL' KEEPS, FOR WE WERE BIRTHED WITH PRAYER AND GOD HAS NOT FORGOTTEN. SO AS I MOURN OUR CONDITION I ALSO CAN JOY AT THE MAGNITUDE OF GOD'S LOVE FOR...WE AMERICA.

Coming my Way... (Poetry) - 5/30/2017 6:34:02 AM
I'm sorry to hear that. This poem is uncharacteristic. When I saw the word "coming" I thought of something else. I hope the thought cheers you up. Ron

Memories Revisit (Poetry) - 5/28/2017 1:46:31 PM
Easier said than done, and time does NOT heal all wounds; I have found that out. Love and best wishes to you D.L. Régis

Memories Revisit (Poetry) - 5/27/2017 8:15:14 AM
Yes, always live in the moment! Never look back always move forward! Peace love and light Amber

Memories Revisit (Poetry) - 5/26/2017 6:33:12 AM
Some memories I'like to keep. Others I'd like to shred. And then there are the ones I wish I could remember.

Memories Revisit (Poetry) - 5/26/2017 5:21:39 AM
Old heartaches and love-hate relationships… Yes… Shred them. No one wants to hear them over and over. Wonderful, one-of-a-kind experiences that only could happen because you were in the right time and place in a kind of Forrest Gump or Walter Mitty situation… No… Write vividly about them and share it with the world… Forever on the Cloud. Ron

Memories Revisit (Poetry) - 5/25/2017 8:56:29 PM
Better yet to forget the suitcase or trunk and through all of them into the shredder & let them go forever...-e-

One We Are. . . (Poetry) - 5/24/2017 2:57:03 PM
to be one is family

One We Are. . . (Poetry) - 5/24/2017 5:57:27 AM
If we can ever get rid of religion, and the hatred it creates, and focus on real problems in the world, we may yet realize we are one.

One We Are. . . (Poetry) - 5/24/2017 4:57:35 AM
Atrocity makes us sad. But, compared with corporate malfeasance leading to death and war (the Syrian war has probably killed a million people in the Iraqi war more) terrorism is a drop in the bucket. It, too will pass and become passé. Ron

Boring (Poetry) - 5/21/2017 12:25:03 PM
pretty dog gone boring, kudos

Boring (Poetry) - 5/21/2017 7:09:29 AM
That is the very reason why man was not meant to be monogamous. As the French say, "Viva la difference!" Ron

Winds of Time (Poetry) - 5/19/2017 4:36:40 AM
lyrical words serve to inspire never stop writing m

Winds of Time (Poetry) - 5/18/2017 8:59:02 AM
lilting, musical, wonderful poem...well done!

Winds of Time (Poetry) - 5/18/2017 7:49:53 AM
brief but deeply felt

Winds of Time (Poetry) - 5/18/2017 6:26:06 AM
How brief this love we must capture while it is here. Ron

Winds of Time (Poetry) - 5/17/2017 3:46:11 PM
When we put on the wings of imagination there are no boundaries left to unshackle dear poet, have a great day dear D, xo

Shortness of Breath (Poetry) - 5/17/2017 1:55:31 PM
I think that is good advice, Deborah. Love and best wishes, Regis

Shortness of Breath (Poetry) - 5/17/2017 9:34:02 AM
Seduction isn't a foot race… It's a marathon. The longer one can raise the blood pressure just a bit without bursting an artery or valve, the higher the high at the end. When you can exhale… Ron

More Ways Then Once (Poetry) - 5/17/2017 7:46:40 AM
I love it when a woman does that to me as well. ;-) Ron

More Ways Then Once (Poetry) - 5/17/2017 1:42:26 AM
a wonderful moment

More Ways Then Once (Poetry) - 5/17/2017 1:21:20 AM
Very seductive poetry,well done!

More Ways Then Once (Poetry) - 5/16/2017 5:40:29 PM
...and I hope you two are still together, lovers for ever...-e-

Fruits of Her Labor (Poetry) - 5/16/2017 5:02:04 AM
it was and always will be

Fruits of Her Labor (Poetry) - 5/15/2017 6:58:37 AM
The mother of all natures… Ron

Pieces (Poetry) - 5/14/2017 5:45:15 AM
Probably the juiciest ones that no one will ever savor. I never wrote a diary. But I often wonder that perhaps people who do secretly want someone to read it later. A sort of confession and revelation all in one. Ron

Pieces (Poetry) - 5/13/2017 10:33:22 AM
Who ripped the pages out?

Pieces (Poetry) - 5/13/2017 8:15:18 AM
Eh . . . What else can you do?

Occurring (Poetry) - 5/13/2017 7:43:04 AM
Looking forward to the skin part. Ron

Occurring (Poetry) - 5/12/2017 11:05:41 PM
A forever subject; a sizzling picture, undeniable words. It's like rounding third base and heading for home--only better.

Occurring (Poetry) - 5/12/2017 1:03:49 PM
brings up fine memories

Occurring (Poetry) - 5/12/2017 12:49:22 PM
Well hell, get it on then!

Fingertips (Poetry) - 5/12/2017 10:22:36 AM
emotive

Fingertips (Poetry) - 5/11/2017 7:44:14 AM
Is that what little Stevie Wonder meant when he sang, Fingertips, Part Two, at nine years old? There certainly is nothing like a woman's touch. Ron

Fingertips (Poetry) - 5/11/2017 6:17:16 AM
Let your fingers do the talking.

Fingertips (Poetry) - 5/10/2017 4:28:33 PM
Well thank you, young lady, but maybe you shouldn't have told everyone about our internet affair...:) -e-

Soul (Poetry) - 5/9/2017 5:41:52 AM
I'll remember that. Ron

Soul (Poetry) - 5/8/2017 9:32:33 AM
Clever thoughts turned into words and absolutely true.

Always Dreaming (Poetry) - 5/8/2017 5:19:50 AM
It seems that Triple Crown aspirants always have great names, and Always Dreaming certainly is apropos for a racehorse on Churchill Downs. Of thousands of other horses and their owners dreaming of the same outcome, only one can win the Kentucky Derby. All of that finery got soaked and the track was really sloppy. It sure pays to be out in front because Always Dreaming and his jockey hardly had any mud on them. Some of the others probably couldn't even see on the home stretch. Ron

Always Dreaming (Poetry) - 5/8/2017 4:23:17 AM
I LOVE YOUR WORDS!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Always Dreaming (Poetry) - 5/7/2017 10:00:19 AM
Was unable to read "The Knowing." I'm sure it continued stressing the knowledge of your own well thought out poetry.

Always Dreaming (Poetry) - 5/7/2017 7:52:59 AM
Dreams do come true. Dream on.

Always Dreaming (Poetry) - 5/7/2017 7:29:51 AM
Stay on course Deborah! Great horse, great poem :)

Before (Poetry) - 5/7/2017 4:55:02 AM
Pushing all the right buttons, exploding with lusty flavors. Ron

Before (Poetry) - 5/7/2017 3:55:21 AM
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Before (Poetry) - 5/6/2017 10:17:11 AM
Ahhh . . . Yes Deborah, you gave life to the photo.

Mother oh Mother (Poetry) - 5/5/2017 8:59:25 PM
A beautifully perfect write on a wonderful mother...-e-

Mother oh Mother (Poetry) - 5/5/2017 6:37:02 AM
Enjoyed your poem, but mother nature is not always beautiful. She is also the cause of much pain and destruction in this world of ours.

Mother oh Mother (Poetry) - 5/5/2017 5:49:34 AM
That last line surprised me… But it shouldn't have. Ron

Mother oh Mother (Poetry) - 5/5/2017 1:41:15 AM
How sweet the sound that saved a wretch like me, nature always saves me, so you can imagine how much I adore your poem and your photo dear poetess. Thank you for sharing, have a blessed day, keep writing, it keeps the spirit alive and well. xo

Mother oh Mother (Poetry) - 5/4/2017 5:53:15 PM
Well written and I second that beautiful poetic sentiment,I love mother nature too. Best wishes always from Kay

Mother oh Mother (Poetry) - 5/4/2017 1:29:32 PM
Very nice.

Disrobed (Poetry) - 5/4/2017 8:50:58 AM
That is a high honor. She could of said you were her peanut butter;)

Disrobed (Poetry) - 5/4/2017 6:06:23 AM
What ya see is what ya get.

Disrobed (Poetry) - 5/4/2017 3:37:11 AM
LOVELY!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Lost in Love (Poetry) - 5/2/2017 6:39:13 AM
And, lost love, from the look of it. Happens to the best of us. Ron

R a v i s h Me (Poetry) - 4/30/2017 6:10:54 AM
Only a woman could do that, so I guess I have to leave it up to the women in your life. ;-) Ron

Chess (Poetry) - 4/29/2017 11:57:17 AM
I use the cheat version that tells you how many moves you can make lol

Chess (Poetry) - 4/29/2017 11:28:24 AM
And even though we try to make all the best moves, we make bad ones and often don't become what we want to become. Ron

Chess (Poetry) - 4/29/2017 6:30:27 AM
Profound, Deborah.

A Woman's Hands (Poetry) - 4/28/2017 5:54:02 AM
Very beautiful,reading this makes a woman smile

Nocturnal Images (Poetry) - 4/27/2017 7:17:30 AM
Obviously, you are a creature of the night. In those nocturnal images are the ones that matter. Ron

Nocturnal Images (Poetry) - 4/27/2017 6:27:41 AM
Nothing quite like anticipation.

Needless (Poetry) - 4/25/2017 6:36:57 AM
Michael beat me to it! Most people seem to need more, not less. We've got greed built into us. Ron

Needless (Poetry) - 4/25/2017 5:51:12 AM
Needless to say.

Needless (Poetry) - 4/25/2017 4:30:33 AM
needless words ~ yes; needless things ~ probably; needless offerings ~ unlikely. . . Cheers, alex

A Love Story Began (Poetry) - 4/24/2017 6:57:34 PM
Sometimes, from seemingly small beginnings, great love ensues. Love and best wishes, Régis

You Were Sure (Poetry) - 4/24/2017 6:56:41 PM
It happens all the time in this world/life; it is a recurring theme, sadly. Thought-provoking, D.L. Love and best wishes, Régis

You Were Sure (Poetry) - 4/20/2017 7:18:19 AM
Early on, yes. Later and more experienced, make sure that the other reciprocated before engaging. Ron

You Were Sure (Poetry) - 4/19/2017 10:47:47 AM
Eh . . . I imagine this happens often, Deborah.

A Love Story Began (Poetry) - 4/19/2017 9:10:53 AM
a love story's evergreen beginning is always the best in compare with its blue ending. . . Always, alex ;))

A Love Story Began (Poetry) - 4/19/2017 5:45:34 AM
Did she really have lavender eyes? If she did, she was quite unique and that is what added to her mystique. Ron

A Love Story Began (Poetry) - 4/19/2017 3:27:08 AM
. .. and what a beginning . . .

In - Between the Lines (Poetry) - 4/17/2017 2:12:05 PM
All I see in betwix the lines is blank space, possibly because of the blank spaces in my brain...:) -e-

In - Between the Lines (Poetry) - 4/16/2017 6:19:12 AM
the art of penetration into a matter is similar to diving with aqualung; you know what I mean. Cheers, alex

In - Between the Lines (Poetry) - 4/15/2017 4:31:15 PM
I think I do that all the time; there are some people who express things but that is not what they really mean. Thought-provoking, Deborah. Love and best wishes, Regis

In - Between the Lines (Poetry) - 4/15/2017 8:24:09 AM
It would be nice to take everyone at face value. Unfortunately, so many feel they need to deviate or lie just to get along. Ron

In - Between the Lines (Poetry) - 4/14/2017 4:37:38 PM
If you can't speak to me righteously I won't spend my time trying to make out what you were hiding things you said.

Advice ? (Poetry) - 4/12/2017 6:32:34 AM
Advice depends on the giver and the receiver. Mood and attitude play a part in the giving or the receipt. Ron

Advice ? (Poetry) - 4/12/2017 6:27:07 AM
because of the karmic ties many of us cannot jump over obstacles, our own heads, in the most cases. Cheers, alex

Advice ? (Poetry) - 4/12/2017 12:04:51 AM
How those words ring Oh so true... Diana...

Advice ? (Poetry) - 4/11/2017 10:15:20 AM
Eh . . . Love the "just plain Stupid" line myself.

For Awhile (Poetry) - 4/10/2017 7:16:58 AM
Yet you still remember wonderful short piece Most enjoyable.... peace be with you

For Awhile (Poetry) - 4/7/2017 3:02:38 AM
But hopefully your soul is resilient... And in time, ripe for new experiences...

A Blessing (Poetry) - 4/5/2017 2:54:05 AM
Being a born 'rambler'.., your beautiful and perfectly executed economy of words fascinates and thrills me... Love, Diana...

For Awhile (Poetry) - 4/3/2017 5:52:16 AM
But now gone. Ron

Three for Some (Poetry) - 4/1/2017 9:49:13 AM
juggling is a good occupation almost in all cases ;)) in maths, the scheme of the square is a universal solution to be realized in a diagonal, vertical or horizontal division. Cheers, alex

Three for Some (Poetry) - 4/1/2017 7:45:43 AM
The more the merrier? I have thought about it. But I have trouble figuring out how I would please the other one while I was pleasing the other (duplicate) one. Taking a tip from dancing… It takes two to tango. Three is more like gymnastics. ;-) Ron

Three for Some (Poetry) - 3/31/2017 10:13:34 AM
Fantasizing was great when I was young enough to find enjoyment from it, but now I don't get any enjoyment so no more for me, the only thing I use that for is to pee...:) -e-

Three for Some (Poetry) - 3/31/2017 8:55:18 AM
Hah! I quit fantasizing and joined the crowd years ago.

Simple Pleasures (Poetry) - 3/31/2017 7:02:04 AM
You're right, I wasn't. Maybe I should have been. Ron

Simple Pleasures (Poetry) - 3/30/2017 5:33:13 PM
So you have to bring back those nights, thats all there is to it... -e-

Simple Pleasures (Poetry) - 3/30/2017 5:17:49 PM
Strong work here.

My Elusive Butterfly (Poetry) - 3/30/2017 5:39:45 AM
That is certainly a very good VR set up that you have. Where can I get one? Ron

Flung Out of Space (Poetry) - 3/29/2017 6:59:02 AM
Fabulous mini poem!!

Flung Out of Space (Poetry) - 3/29/2017 6:14:41 AM
It looks like a nooner is in store for lunch. Ron

Everlasting Love (Poetry) - 3/28/2017 7:10:32 AM
Until the 12th of never, and that's a long, long time. Ron

Everlasting Love (Poetry) - 3/27/2017 11:27:30 AM
Yep. Cool is the word.

Everlasting Love (Poetry) - 3/27/2017 10:33:18 AM
Cool

Footwork (Poetry) - 3/26/2017 10:19:51 AM
Some degree of stability is necessary for any kind of success,and physical balance-both feet on the ground-is just as important as mental,emotional or any other type of balance. Thanks for sharing such a profound truth, and continued success. Barbara J. henry

Footwork (Poetry) - 3/26/2017 10:01:37 AM
yes, when one foot is wrong, the other is nearby to support and adjust; that's why we call them both by one single word 'feet' ;)) Cheers, alex

Footwork (Poetry) - 3/26/2017 6:57:24 AM
Being well grounded is the first step to almost anything… Ron

Footwork (Poetry) - 3/25/2017 2:43:31 PM
I can walk and chew gum...sometimes ;)

Footwork (Poetry) - 3/25/2017 11:21:35 AM
Kick with both feet simultaneously!

And That Was That... (Poetry) - 3/21/2017 7:09:37 AM
A tit for a tat? Ron

And That Was That... (Poetry) - 3/21/2017 12:58:21 AM
They say that heterosexual men go crazy over a picture like the one with your poem. Not true-ooooooooooooooo!

Allen's House (Poetry) - 3/19/2017 2:46:33 PM
Those were different times for sure; in northern Alberta when I was a child, our house did not even have a locking door (and there was only one door). Love and best wishes, Regis

Allen's House (Poetry) - 3/14/2017 4:57:30 PM
I think there are very few places left that have unlocked doors, if any at all.

Allen's House (Poetry) - 3/14/2017 10:49:46 AM
Good memories, they will keep you young...-e-

Allen's House (Poetry) - 3/14/2017 9:04:58 AM
Fun way to share this news :)

Allen's House (Poetry) - 3/13/2017 7:47:50 AM
You were curious and respectful. Nothing to really worry about. Nicely told. Ron

Allen's House (Poetry) - 3/13/2017 5:58:09 AM
Yep, this occurring in the fifties -- I lived through those "awakening" days also -- Days when hardly anyone locked their doors. Nice recollections.

My Imagination (Poetry) - 3/12/2017 11:02:20 PM
3 13 2017 Romantic You... TRASK...

My Imagination (Poetry) - 3/12/2017 10:15:00 AM
We'd all like our imaginary lover to be real. Ron

My Imagination (Poetry) - 3/12/2017 7:36:45 AM
well, if you were well trained emotionally, you have all chances to make intangible tangible even without being a witch ;)) Cheers, alex

My Imagination (Poetry) - 3/12/2017 5:48:42 AM
Surely, in spite of all obstacles, that day will come.

Stages of Love (Poetry) - 3/11/2017 10:10:54 PM
You certainly captured the stages. The fun is in the details. Oh yeah.

Stages of Love (Poetry) - 3/11/2017 6:28:24 AM
pls, when dance dance, . . when love love ;)) Cheers, alex

Stages of Love (Poetry) - 3/10/2017 7:27:20 AM
A natural progression that often unwinds in reverse order as partners dance away from one another. Ron

Stages of Love (Poetry) - 3/9/2017 12:57:49 PM
Taking on the characteristics of humans from your pen.

E y e s (Poetry) - 3/7/2017 2:29:19 PM
Green & bright blue eyes turn me on...:) -e-

E y e s (Poetry) - 3/7/2017 12:16:09 PM
Certain attraction. No questions asked. Ron

E y e s (Poetry) - 3/7/2017 4:25:27 AM
Yup. The eyes tell the tale for sure,

Early Spring Rains (Poetry) - 3/5/2017 12:55:17 PM
Nothing is sweeter than a rose. In early spring nothing is more brilliant than watching where the azalea grows. Ron

Early Spring Rains (Poetry) - 3/4/2017 2:41:28 PM
Those rains are old mom Natures way to clean the air. Do you notice how nice it is to breathe after they pass...-e-

Early Spring Rains (Poetry) - 3/4/2017 11:25:29 AM
The majestic nature of mother nature never fails to inspire.

Smooth Operator (Poetry) - 3/4/2017 11:06:34 AM
better than Sade's SO. . . seriously, it has often happened to me ;)) Cheers, alex

Smooth Operator (Poetry) - 3/3/2017 10:16:13 PM
sweet

Smooth Operator (Poetry) - 3/3/2017 4:36:03 PM
"Smooth Operator." Nice play on words.

Pleasure. . . (Poetry) - 3/3/2017 3:03:50 AM
Depending on your outlook, this is very seductive...-e-