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· ECHOSIS

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· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Exiting the Clouds

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Most of us know how difficult it is during trying times to be in the moment and be satisfied, yet…

Sunday, February 17, 2013

Exiting the Clouds



Entering one's Now

How long the traverse
Mountainous obstacles
Seem not of our creation
Yet rock hard impasses appear
Where clear path seemed obvious
Now impassible

The best laid plans...
Swirl amidst the winds of challenge
Icing our tenacity
Whiting-out our vision
Deafening our ears to resolve

Made to stop
We seek refuge
Cower we must
Time's weather independent
Unaware love's thermal core
Knows but limited challenge

Suffering assumes the time
We fearfully give it
Granting indecision
Until we satiate

Sentience abides
Patience its virtue

The conscious
Somehow realize a clearing
Both path and atmosphere
Reveal survival routes

Ill weather lifts
We often know not why
A path reveals itself
Accompanied by fixed ropes of trust

Having exited the clouds
We embrace our trailhead
Willingly remove extra weight
No longer needed upon our shoulders

Stripping to our nakedness
We ready the entering of one's Now





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Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on February 18, 2013
the Now must be right up there in the Pantheon
of Elusives with catching mercury in bare hands
and seeing Bigfoot meet the Abominable Snowman
eight miles up...why can't we settle for Now
and be done with it?.but it's not in our nature to
be content with what is

go on, Odin, go on!

john

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2013
I like what Edward Phillips wrote about your remarkable ability to compose. Beautiful two lines: "Unaware love's thermal core/Knows but limited challenge." Also "A path reveals itself/Accompanied by fixed ropes of trust," and a "Suffering assumes the time/We fearfully give it." These are profound words. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 17, 2013
The great allegory comparing life's tribulations with a mountain pass that closes periodically and then opens from our persistence and unwillingness to fail. Stripped naked, we are now ready to enter the world of now.

Ron

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on February 17, 2013
thank you Odin for this well written traverse
budd

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on February 17, 2013
Behold the world of Odin Roark where the price of admission is the simple acknowledgement that poetry is a blend of insight, skill, and intent all woven together with a touch that seems to be reachable but is as elusive as finding the rainbow's end. And where you are never exit disappointed.


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