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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Grooving Time

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Be Here Now, Be In the Moment, Be Who You Are…all takes effort, together with...

Tuesday, April 9, 2013


Poem Artwork
Grooving Time

Many beginnings and ends
Leave behind careless finger prints
Errors' dust and residue
Layering one's facade

But beneath it all
If embraced
Destiny's motion
Remains on course

Like the needle
In a record's groove
Fate travels true the path
‘til one's song runs out



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Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2013
Odin, I like that your "careless finger prints" eludes with me to how we briskly handle what we touch in life; all stemming from your word "careless." I like that. The 'dust' of mistakes, and smudges of 'residue' depict true-grit living...then moving those elements to a vinyl record (here's where dust and fingerprints really come in. . . and thereby include 'using and knowing'). Fate's true path traveled being a record groove is an idea from the interpretive eyes and mind that are faithfully your signature. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 10, 2013
Great analogy for the fateful course of life. Most people will say they chose the path they're on from either ignorance or arrogance. I say that, “there but for fortune,” we are all fated to where the world takes us, and we have little to say about it.

Ron

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on April 10, 2013
the thought process is skillfully condensed here,
every phrase counts and builds the motif

well delivered, Odin

john

Reviewed by Isabella Koldras
Reviewed on April 9, 2013
Wow. Now I'm grooving on the music,
to celebrate.....Returning to your's
old self........ Odin.
'til one's song runs out.....long way to go!

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on April 9, 2013
sing your own song and be happy
budd


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