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Fantasizing Fantasy

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On this upcoming anniversary, may we never forget Lehman Bros and September 15, 2008, where identifying and respecting instincts baffled many, especially those entrapped in the business of illusions.

Saturday, September 14, 2013


Poem Artwork
Fantasizing Fantasy
by Odin Roark

Unlike tomorrow
Yesterday was special
Projecting today’s reason to regret

What started out as mere composition
Something most do well
Scarfs
Coats
A poodle in hand
Making an ordinary group picture unique
Smiles
Arms in arms
Shoulder pals
Stoic faces for good measure
All enjoined for camera’s sake
Knowing a picture is supposed to last

Then

A storm
A dark night
A flash
Beckoning moments
Drawing downward
Ignored instincts rendered prophetic
Soaked clothes of the deep
Like bobbing corks orphaned from desperation
Now in swaddling survival gear

No one knew
Meeting the man patiently waiting
As silhouette yesterday
Would become the guide today

A man now recognized
A stranger from nowhere
Lurking as the observer
A back row sneak
A collective shadow
Smirking at our smug confidence

We were indomitable
We were of Wall Street
We could walk on water

Or float like the photograph now drifting alongside
  


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Reviewed by Ruan Mills
Reviewed on September 17, 2013
A fabulous metaphor here, the photograph fluttering and drifting, a mere snapshot that tells all yet says little.
Rx

Reviewed on September 16, 2013
excellent, speculation on interest rates and the new door keeper and QE sinking, it's all the same spin in control.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 15, 2013
We were indomitable
We were of Wall Street
We could walk on water

And then we sank, just like the unsinkable Titanic.

Reviewed by Robert Whitford
Reviewed on September 14, 2013
Lehman brothers selling nothing substantial and foretelling the great crash that we are still recovering from. My 401k still remembers the hurt if no one else does. The era of bailouts and gross misconduct from the street to the hill and beyond. We are living in strange times indeed. Once burned, I have learned a valuable lesson. I hope they did. They ignored a lot of basic common and financial sense. Good subject matter Odin. Bob

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on September 14, 2013
cryptosisms: exposing film where images remain trapped between shutter speed and light, making it much more difficult to perceive original composition of inner eye. M.True

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on September 14, 2013
Pondering poetic thoughts... Well done!


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