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Fine Powder Past

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How perfect we wish our lives. Perhaps only the tolerant realize such perfection is a paradox. (Image by Zazzle)

Wednesday, March 19, 2014


Poem Artwork
Fine Powder Past
by Odin Roark

Mistakes
Oversights
Misjudgments
Flaws

So many snapshot-reflections

Tumbling down life-scape mountainsides,
out of control avalanches at times,
shearing off youthful innocence,
submerging stalwart tenacity until,
like trees engulfed in cold hibernation,
nature’s cycle rises through the cold,
eventually reappearing.

So too
The sequence of our aging
Brings renewed growth
Along with accepting the old

Such realization
Doesn’t take much

A subway ride can do it
Surrounded by myriad faces
You catch yourself
In a window reflection
“Is this me…finally?”

“Have I weathered through all that?
Those?
Them?
Me?”

A glance at your feet
shows roots as such,
still intact,
still able to transport new seedlings,
to spread,
sprout,
regenerate steadfast blossoms,
preparing another of life’s pollination
for wisdom’s quest.

And so it goes

Longevity needs
but nurturing,
embracing pain and laughter,
with the conviction
that its dichotomy is perfection

Being at such peace
allows the all of one’s life
to quietly become
a fine powder past;
a journey’s end--

for now.




 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 20, 2014
It is interesting that Beh calls the veins in her feet, roots. I guess if we can't have perfection, with time, wisdom will do.

Ron

PS. Be advised that the poem I wrote this morning to be posted on Saturday, Paradox, was not inspired by reading your intro to this poem. On the other hand, great minds think along similar lines… ;-)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on March 20, 2014
"A subway ride can do it
Surrounded by myriad faces
You catch yourself
In a window reflection
“Is this me…finally?”

“Have I weathered through all that?
Those?
Them?
Me?"

Absolutely, Odin, absolutely been there, done that.

Reviewed on March 20, 2014
You've got to find peace and happiness within yourself. Without the ability to do that you will never find peace.

Sandie

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on March 20, 2014
much to contemplate in this one
budd

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 20, 2014
Being at peace with one's self is a marvelous thing that many fail to achieve.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on March 19, 2014
A very positive message...didn't feel that way when I was literally looking into that subway window...but things do work out if you let them.


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