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· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

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Dreaming Wild Back

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Many would argue there’s a “wild” streak of risk-taking in everyone, regardless of age. Some just exercise it differently. The most life threatening danger, however, is to deny the existence of risk.

Wednesday, May 21, 2014


Poem Artwork
Dreaming Wild Back
by Odin Roark

Gonna keep it together,
Those snapshot archives,
Those snatches of breath taken,
Not to be exhaled,
But to be held,
Awaiting danger’s next move.

How empowering those glimpses
Performed by mortality’s jester,
The one always goading our
Instinctual regard for safety.

To go for it,
To reach a bit higher,
To trust the fingertips will balance,
That foot-jams will hold,
That focused breathing will not betray,
Such is the elixir for living.

Aging life’s climbers,
Forever trust the last peak conquered
Will sustain that need to never forget,
That the eventual hospice base camp reality
Will somehow prolong stubborn imagination,
Even as one gums the peas and carrots,
Slides mashed potatoes into the once fire-in-the-belly,
Now but a campfire of reverie.

Oh, to nourish another day for
Dreaming wild back.
  


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Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on May 27, 2014
I am utterly astonished by how totally I understand this poem. Boldly evident is the spirit of 'you' contained in this and your knowledge of the aged. I read in these lines your own identity in the script of this poem, to have placed it on a page more clearly than any snapshot could have done. "....empowering those glimpses" is like a muscular youth of clear, tawny skin standing right next to the wheelchair pushed up to the table for the slide of the mashed potatoes into the ashes-and-acid-belly. Enjoyable title that needed the poem and so perfectly finished it. ~~ Diana

Reviewed on May 21, 2014
There is a saying in Chinese. - "There is ALWAYS one mountain higher than the one you stand on". People take risk to go to the top, and then realize that they are not even at the highest mountain. How sad!! Risk is good, but sometimes the risk you take would take on a drastic turn to the bottom where you have to start again. My advice is that ALWAYS be who you are and be proud of who you have become. Others are going to judge us no matter where we are in life anyway. Let them. Their opinions don't make us, because if you know who you are then you cannot be swayed by people who don't know what they are talking about when they don't know you.

Sandie

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on May 21, 2014
'Forever trust the last peak conquered'. A great multi-faceted symbolic phrase. Trusting what we've done can sometimes be the incentive to press on. I can surely attest to that. Knowing that you've done it before can be comforting and inspiring. However... when I learned the importance of looking out, as well as in, and getting out of the creative 'fuzzy bubble' so many prefer to remain in - where they're accepted and imbibed like sweet morning coffee - I was able to go beyond where I'd been, and who I'd become, to find the jewels of creative inspiration that await all who press into the unknown with honest expectation. It's a risk indeed. And failure awaits all who take risks. I can attest to having many more failures than victories. But the risk is worth it. Another pearl of poetic thought here, BKB. Enjoyed. Blessings... rlc


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