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Mistakes We Buy Into

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Mistakes are often labeled a bad rap, given they are most often seen as negative outcomes of decisions. (Image by Michael P. Ness)

Monday, August 15, 2016


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Mistakes We Buy Into
By Odin Roark

Might parental upbringing be but a whirlwind
wavering over the quicksand of youthful fear?

As children, should there be lessons learned
through the ignorance of grace
and the false power of intimidating?

Our adolescence provides so many missteps
we embrace without reason,
even though we possess the sure-footedness,
but choose to ignore the balance offered.

And then there is adulthood,
where words and actions are as often
expressed with hatred and judgment,
even as our innate nature is to embrace
rather than reject,
empathize, rather than criticize,
accept our weaknesses,
rather than choosing a path of self destruction.

Instead of discovering errors as revelatory,
we buy into most of the mistakes we make.
enjoining the pandemic of victimization,
all the while forgetting the choice of grace
visited upon everyone’s childhood playground…
so long ago.


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Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on August 15, 2016
A fascinating topic well explored. We need to center ourselves more deeply, not just mentally or emotionally, but rather embrace everything that we are, mistakes included. I have also written a poem called "Mistakes", much simpler than yours, which I haven't posted yet. Thanks for your insights. Mistakes are "revelatory". In my poem, I call them "seeds". John

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 15, 2016
8-15-2016:

Only Fools Never Make Mistakes...

As You Reap What You Sow...

TRASK...

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on August 15, 2016
I can sense your return to the fray by the strength of your words. Such nicely layered slices of life, built with the carefulness of one who has lived the mistakes of which he writes--and learned from them. Who could ask for more?

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 15, 2016
You're evincing a kind of wisdom here that many don't have. My childhood playgrounds mostly were war zones; fighting, crying, yelling, complaining; running and telling mom. Oh well... Honestly, all the many mistakes I've made were the best schooling I've ever had. Don't waste a good mistake, learn from it, and I did. Still make mistakes, and I still learn from them. Maybe the only real mistake is the one we learn nothing from. Ha. 'Often labeled a bad rap' you say. Maybe for some. As George Clooney said: 'We don't learn from our successes, we learn from our failures.' Lord knows I've learned much. Thanks for arousing thought. Peace to you...

Reviewed by Ruan Mills
Reviewed on August 15, 2016
So good to hear your voice calling me to think and rethink - I have missed that.
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