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Forever Awakening

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

To consider how tenuous and short-lived our existence, is to ponder some of its arresting moments of growth and the possibility such infinitesimal particles of the universe are always just remaining ready to awaken. (Painting by etsy.com)

Thursday, January 23, 2020


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Forever Awakening

Worlds become
Whether by the oregano and garlic aroma
Or
The eagle’s screech on high
A distant parental swell of a daughter’s little league score
Or
A boy’s first job
The brown bags with a milk bottle on the bottom
Wonder Bread on top
A cheery “Have a nice day, Mrs. Gilbert”
Or
Discovered independence brought forward
By Tropic of Cancer’s ink and paper visions
Or
An off-base Tijuana weekend pass
Uniform pressed
Marksman medal polished
Old Spice weather pattern alight
Reality’s first XXX presentation
Painted eyes eliciting compassion
Where Penthouse and Playboy pages once ruled

To remember the boy of curiosity
Now a man of resolve
Conjures classic images
Housed now behind
Surreal windows
Doors
Foreshadowed urns of origins

Questioning of another kind
Makes buoyant the cushion of consciousness
Defying impending gravity
Asking again of the heart ever faithful
“Will I be ready to accept
Time’s next momentary need for me?”

Forever is a non-stop cycle
Where darkness
Sleep
Awakening
Is but a blip on eternity’s consciousness

 



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Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on January 28, 2020
Just 57 years ago I visited old Tijuana, got married and divorced by the same 8-year old boy (4 hours apart), sporting my Old Spice, sans my expert marksman ribbon, wearing an oversized sombrero while riding a jackass. I involuntarily, donated to the Red Cross cleverly disguised as 12 young boys surrounding me with open bottles of India ink, poised and ready to douse me if I refused. Lost a bet to a young senorita who claimed she could sit on the barstool and pee in a beer bottle on the floor. She did, but her secret is safe with me. Now, older and wiser what did I learn? Only this: Living by your wits is not something to try against experts.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 25, 2020
Some interesting and arresting instances of "waking up" to a new reality, couched in the universal knowledge that what seems so important to each individual is but an infinitesimal speck of time not worth considering beyond that life lived so short and snuffed out so quickly.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on January 24, 2020
Sometimes times goes by so fast, we barely have time to enjoy what's happening in the now,. but when we pull those memories out of the dust at a later time, we can enjoy the reawakening they bring.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on January 23, 2020
What you describe seems to be the challenge, to appreciate all the little things that we have and turn all the rest into "awakenings", even if it is "but a blip on eternity's consciousness". It's all well worth the trouble, all in the name of human experience, unique of its kind.


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