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Living Weightless

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

I, for one, sometimes work so hard to discover definition when it requires none. (Image by pintrest)

Wednesday, February 3, 2021


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Living Weightless

 

How pure this burden of weight

Some call isolation

Others deem connection

To the sometimes-slow erosion of falsehood

 

To walk upon paths of nature’s blending

That sometimes-circuitous route asking one

Accept disappointment

Embrace the lessons hard fought

Accept a leaf that reluctantly floats to its demise

Knows well the feather that follows

 

All life’s lessons deliver with regret

Conscious that without mistakes

There is less learned

 

And so it is with love

Hard fought

Genuinely earned

 

Rejoice

For it is not for me

Or you

To possess

 

It is life’s weightless

Amorphous wonderment

Reserved for those

Who might admit defeat

Yet know

Teachings are only valid

For those who seek

One’s realm of fragile understanding

 

Weightlessness

How beautiful love’s reality

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 5, 2021
Being creatures of this world evolution, we are geared to having weight. But I believe your poem is describing a feeling that comes to us from time to time, usually when we are in love, but not always where we do not feel our weight or the weight of the world at all but enjoy the freedom that weightlessness brings.

Ron

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on February 4, 2021
Those who know the subject better than I do
say that we are all weightless in paradise.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on February 4, 2021
This poem itself is as "weightless" as it is deep. Like the "falling feather" that amazes, full of hope and promise. One of your better poems.

Reviewed by A. Frailey
Reviewed on February 3, 2021
Beautifully said!
I especially resonate with—

...Reserved for those

Who might admit defeat

Yet know

Teachings are only valid

For those who seek...

Many blessings, Odin.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on February 3, 2021
I'm of a mind that one must first experience weight (or failing in love) to understand and appreciate weightlessness (or succeeding in love). The cognitive process of acquiring knowledge and being creative can also be a weightless experience, and a treasure that is easily carried. Thank you for sharing. Enjoyed. rlc


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