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Companionless

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- Loneliness can make a person behave in a regretful manner at times. (Image by Pinterest)

Sunday, August 22, 2021


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Companionless

 

 

Loneliness…

 

The only seemingly comfortless home

Either of us had for so long.

No bigger than a matchbox,

Or at times

Vast as the heavens full of sparkling hope

With you as my sole roommate

Offering nary a flea bite of company

As you stare at me recalling the night

When a knock at the door drove fear to the surface.

 

Why do you bring that up now?

 

Loneliness was afraid to open the door,

But when blind courage prevailed,

There she stood

Wanting to borrow a candle,

And you stuttered and said

“I don’t have one.”

 

The two of you made eye contact

Avoiding the bleakness

Of two dark, one-room apartments

Yet unable to utter a word further

Shamefully turning your backs on each other

And stepping back

Into closed door isolation.

 

So it was,

Loneliness.

 

So it remained,

Stubborn as you were.

 

A new roommate has been long in coming,

 

 



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Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 23, 2021
A moving, very visual, vignette Odinsan. The only good thing about loneliness I can see, is that it allows your soul to roam, sometimes to places it would never go otherwise. Enjoyed this. rlc

Reviewed on August 22, 2021
It's weird as well to feel lonely in a crowd. THAT is so uncomfortable.
I love your poem, loneliness and all, Odin!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 22, 2021
They shoot hermits, don't they? One of the reasons after living in 20 or so apartments as a student with some great roommates and some bad, I started renting rooms alone and found that it basically isolated me from others and made it harder for me to go out and establish new friends and relationships. So I bought a house at my first opportunity, helping me become a member of the community and the people in it.

While hiding away in a studio apartment studying for my doctorate, the obese woman who moved in next door for the summer knocked on my door and asked me for some butter. I believe I had some to give her. But she suddenly apologized for all the noise a couple of nights before when she said, "I had some guys over and we played cards." Not from what I heard. ;-)

And in the process of telling me she told me that I had "hot hands." I'm sorry, but that encounter did not turn out to be any kind of relationship… Thank goodness!

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on August 22, 2021
A lonely poem indeed. Loneliness can be paralyzing, preventing people from acting as they know they should to find the companionship they want and need.


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