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Magnanimous Afterglow

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

A flame can represent many acts of reality, but might it also be but a preamble to what might be important to experience in one’s before and after? (Image by pinterest)

Saturday, March 2, 2024


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Magnanimous Afterglow

 

Like a candle

Much of our passion and flame for life evaporates,

Leaving behind energy’s aftermath of drippings,

Puddles,

And hardened waves of stillness,

Save some whisps of undulating smoke

trailing into infinity’s residual archives.

 

So many lives merely melt away,

Leaving little trace,

Yet while the kindling burned,

Light was available,

Chosen at times to see,

Other times to feel,

Still much of the time

Taken for granted,

If not ignored.

 

Oh,

To seek out the glimmering of life,

Hoping not to leave but a bourgeois aftermath

As clean-up for others,

To burn tenaciously throughout one’s existence,

Like a candle’s rise and fall flicker.

 

To remember

Tribulations of a mind and heart burning to live

Can endure the wavering winds of time,

Become more than a tapering glow about to cease,

Even after succumbing to a lack of air.

 

Such is life’s magnanimous afterglow.


 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 2, 2024
So many leave only their children. And often, those children really know nothing of how the fathers, mothers, grandparents, and distant ancestors really felt life… Whether they had great passion or not, or just meekly survived and had children. Those embers of afterglow of remembering a warm loving ancestor will die in time, but the passionate work of an artist--a poem, novel, song or painting, might keep that remembrance alive for a very long time.

It is ironic that throughout history, it is the worst, the despots and rulers who had their act cleaned up by scribes who remain in our history as examples of both good and bad on which to expand our passions like Michelangelo or Shakespeare, on.

You and I have chosen the path of the artist and I think we will both glow and afterglow for a very, very long time.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on March 2, 2024
"Magnanimous Afterglow" Quite a mouthful. Made me chuckle. Couldn't help seeing the concept from various literary angles and elevations. Here are a few synonyomic shadings to enhance the overall color of it.
Greathearted Jubilation
Benevolent Radiance
Generous Reveling
Noble Elation
Enlightened Euphoria
Thanks for sharing. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on March 2, 2024
If we really were flame to our candle, as you set forth here, lift would be entirely different, even if in the end it is but melted wax and evanescent smoke. The flame alw4ays illuminates.


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