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Distance Without End

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Focusing on “ends” risks loosing the magic of feeling we are always moving away from one state of mind into another in the distance of growth and purpose. Sublime becomes the operative word. (Image by Odin AI)

Friday, October 3, 2025


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 Distance Without End

 

 

 

The last breath of a cello slips into a subway tunnel,

its echo a moth made of glass,

fluttering through the static of lost Wi-Fi signals.

We mistake this for silence. But silence is just sound wearing a cloak of distance.

 

A Steinway’s final chord liquates into the ice of a melting glacier,

 its resonance trapped in the throat of a polar bear’s dream.

 Pavarotti’s high G still ricochets off satellites, whispering to Mars in a dialect of longing.

 

We forget the baby’s cry as easily as we forget passwords,

both stored in the cloud of forgetting.

The homeless wail becomes a ringtone no one answers.

A breakup sob is archived in the museum of unread texts.

 

Yet somewhere, vibrations braid themselves into the hair of comets,

into the pulse of streetlights blinking Morse code to no one in particular.

The cosmos is a DJ remixing our grief into the next sunrise.

 

And when midnight folds itself into a paper crane and flies backward through time,

we realize there was no ending,

only a hallway-like route where distance hums,

and the next door at the far end just opened.

 

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 4, 2025
I was looking for you describing great distances in your unique way but found instead you describing how far our knowledge has come in such a brief time of history history where even cellos haven't been here very long that is Pavarotti still alive?

Certainly driving much of what we do so hastily, like create a password, very soon forget it. Why I'm glad I have my computer doing that for me to give it to those out there that are madly trying to get it to enter my bank vault.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on October 4, 2025
The poet's use of sonic rhythms and imagery take us to place we would not normally go. The cello's breath, the Steinway's chord and Pavarotti's high G (high indeed) against a backdrop of silence that perhaps isn't silence at all but rather "sound wearing a cloak of distance. Such an interesting write.


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