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With Every Step I Took
by Lisa Hilbers → (All Poetry by Lisa Hilbers)
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With Every Step I Took


Oh, I was tired and weary; My
life was filled with pain-
Family and friends has turned
away; Leaving me alone again
but...There was something 'bout
that mountain; That kept calling
out to me; In my sleep or while awake;
So I just had to see


With each step it took me higher;
the air was thin and cool-
The journey treacherous; No climber was I;
maybe...just a fool


So..I began to doubt, the voices
in my ear-
Turn back; Go back; I told myself-
the top is nowhere near


My knees they shook with spasms,
while my eyes filled with sweat-
My strength was fading quickly-
as the sun began to set


Now darkness on this mountain side,
would find me through this night-
Completely alone in thought I'd be-
and fear became my plight


The wrong step could send me crashing,
down upon the rocks below-
Death would be my certain fate-
and no one would ever know


Morning would embrace my tiredness;
at the peak of this rocky terrain-
I was exhausted; but relieved-
as peace coursed through my viens


For there upon that mountain top;
that I had climbed so high-
Stood an 'ol rugged splintered cross-
against a clear blue sky


As tears rolled down my cheeks,
I knelt there upon the stone-
It was then I knew on this journey long,
I'd not took one step alone


© Lisa Hilbers
7/26/05
Photo by: Amy Morrow


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 Reviews of "With Every Step I Took"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 29, 2005
Symbolically strong, Lisa. Thank you for sharing this with all of us. Inspirational message. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 27, 2005
elevated allegory & metaphor ... sometimes the journey is worth the travail of the trail and its climb ...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 27, 2005
Wonderful analogy to life. Hope you took the climb, too.

Ron

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on July 26, 2005
Woderful inspiration!

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on July 26, 2005
a "footprints in the sand" moment realized. really inspiring, Lisa. Dawn

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on July 26, 2005
A beautiful, inspirational write, Lisa. We all need these in our lives. :-) ~~Nordette

Reviewed on July 26, 2005
Lisa,

This is one of the most beautiful, inspirational writes you've written yet--a stunning achievement!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 26, 2005
Beautiful and uplifting Lisa!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on July 26, 2005
upliftingly beautiful, lisa; very well done! brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your fellow texas friend, karen lynn in burleson. :D

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 26, 2005
Beautiful words for beautiful thoughts.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 26, 2005
A wonderful inspirational tale that rings with your beliefs and special faith in the Lord. It truly humbled me.
Felix

Reviewed by A. Keith Barton
Reviewed on July 26, 2005
Beautiful imagery, Lisa. Many have gone before us, but the beauty remains.

Reviewed on July 26, 2005
Beautiful words, how quietly the father reminds us that he is always near.

God Bless,
Tim

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on July 26, 2005
A wonderful and inspiring poem, Lisa. An absolutely beautiful story of faith and determination placed within spotless verse and flowing rhyme. Excellent!!
Take care,
Sherry


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