Spontaneous Cohesion (poem) by SHERRY G HEIM on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 2, 2005

Beautiful passionate romantic writem Sherry! This is how love should be!
" ... Together forming the perfect fusion
We are melded and cast forevermore
Into our destiny of eternal love."

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on May 9, 2005

Sherry this is so romantic, just flows.
I love it! It's Beautiful!

Thanks
Tracey

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on April 27, 2005

Oh Sis, this is so romantic, so beautiful and ethreal. I guess that is what love really is, and I could not have written it any better, than you have here.

"Together forming the perfect fusion
We are melded and cast forevermore
Into our destiny of eternal love"

this is what love is all about.

May the Lord Jesus bless you and yours, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on April 25, 2005

Romantic, passionate, spiritual and ethereal. Wowsers! ~~Nordette
PS: I'm gonna have to track you. I keep missing stuff. LOL

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on April 25, 2005

The molecules of our being

Spin together and create

Yet another higher level of cohesion

As we dance the dance of lovers

Fantastic write...wonderful flow....clap clap clap....love n luck...BHUWAN!!!

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on April 24, 2005

super love piece Sherry, enjd reading the continous flow. G

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 23, 2005

Your poem is a wonder of wonders...
Superbly done......

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 23, 2005

Oh Sherry, this was so lovely! Simply beautiful poetry!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 23, 2005

A most beautiful sensuous and romantic offering, Sherry. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on April 22, 2005

Wonderful enchanting write! I loved this.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on April 20, 2005

yeah! this is what I am talking about
great write Sherry
sweet, soft, loving and tender

William ......peace & Love

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Reviewed on April 20, 2005

Oh Sherry, how beautiful. It's so tender and relaxing...like reading a massage... :-) Blessings, Michelle

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on April 20, 2005

its spring...love is in the air...and on the page., bravo

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 20, 2005

This is beautiful!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on April 20, 2005

An explosion of love, I'd say
fine penning

joy and starlight

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 20, 2005

wonderful write, sherry; well done! :)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 20, 2005

Sherry,

Delightful to read such beauty this morning--thank you for this passionate, delicious write!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on April 20, 2005

Yes, this is the way love's supposed to be ...
each one melting into the other.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on April 20, 2005

What a squirmingly, sensous universe you create here Sherry, faboulous romantic imagery...love it!

Paul;-]

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on April 20, 2005

Sherry
You can bewitch a man in just few lines. this poem can take one to heights of passion. It can toss up one in the fresh air of romance only to let you land in the hands of a loving and caring lady who has a great sense of understanding to human emotionsThanks for this wonderful offering.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 20, 2005

Sweet romantic love poems like this are rare when they are done so well. Congrats Sherry you aced this one.

Felix

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 20, 2005

Pure gold, Sherry!! Gosh, wish I wrote it - but of course!! So, the next best thing is to keep it to drool over again and again... Now THIS is what I'm getting at when I talk of the eruption of that "inner smile"! Tantalisingly flowing yet ribbed with a muscular and rhythmic control. Just gorgeous... and how to get any work done after this...?! TY Kate xx

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 19, 2005

Sherry, this poem is a captivating supernal sojourn into the passion of love's undeniable embrace ... imagery seducing the mind and soul with wonder ... excellent poetry!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 19, 2005

Guess I will have to take another cold shower before going to bed tonight...ed

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on April 19, 2005

sensual and spiritual, the perfect combination. I could read this again and again, Sherry. well done!

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on April 19, 2005

very romantic and spirtual, this transcends Saturday night at the movies :)
bravo
pax A

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 19, 2005

I'm spinning in space, soaring like this poam. What a celestial beauty Sherry! Love in cosmic places is spectacular!;-) Now this is what I call a keeper! Exciting, sensual, and loving...

Love,
Eileen