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An Evening With You
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Response to Sanil Nath's challenge

An Evening With You Dinner for two was the lure he had cast Under the stars, an intimate repast He prepared a meal and a table so fine Finishing it off with strawberries and wine He so loves romancing, not a thing he will miss His soul touches mine with his first gentle kiss His lips like a whisper brushing �gainst mine My heart is a'flutter as our bodies entwine My passions are rising, I am needing much more He�ll tease me with wanting, make me wait for the score He brings me down gently, with a sip of Champagne Says "We�ve got the whole evening, �til the dawn comes again" In front of the fire, he kisses softly my hand Offers me aid as he asks me to stand His arms wrapped around me, a slow, sultry dance I�m caught up quite nicely in his web of romance I�m rapt in the moonlight that shines o�er his face I look in his eyes and his soul fills the space His touch is so tender and my skin is ablaze I�m engulfed in passion�s, hot, hungry waves I kiss his neck softly, moan lowly and say I�m ready to love you. Are you ready to play? My heart skips a beat as he touches my face His arms draw me into his loving embrace He utters no words, puts his mouth against mine I feel heat and passion as our tongues intertwine Our clothes in a heap beneath bodies on fire Our hands in discovery of the things we desire He leads me off to his large feather bed Sets me back on the pillows where he lays down my head He suckles my breast with his ravenous kiss As warmly I drift into passionate bliss My body is churning my legs draw him in His mouth tastes my nectar, now wetting his chin My body arches as I pull him in close We kiss as our scents have us fully engrossed His slow gentle entry as our bodies collide We roll with a fervor that rocks deep inside Our bodies like wild beasts, needing to breed Our passions and longings, now easily freed With both of us spent, I lay sweet in his arms A glorious knowledge of each other�s charms The dawn starts to break on the edge of the earth Our romance of the evening now sensing rebirth Sherry Gail Heim August 3, 2003 Copyright � Sherry Gail Heim 2003

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 13, 2009

A sensually compelling offering, Sherry; in my humble opinion, you responded exceedingly well to the challenge. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on September 2, 2003

romance on fire I'd say, very enjoyable

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on August 27, 2003

I hear someone shout "Encore!!":)?? Can't write more...too busy pantin'. Better tone down next time. Kiddin', acourse. Ya done g r e a t. Pea :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 19, 2003

fabulous response to the challenge Sherry!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on August 18, 2003

Your evening was alot better then mine"Sigh!" Loved the passionate write, glad I stopped in !!

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on August 14, 2003

What a wonderful evening...I really like the picture as well.
~Jackie~

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)

Reviewed on August 9, 2003

Excellent... the whole lot, but i loved the ending, i can sense a part II here, very nice to read, and very nicely written, well done, take care...Mark xx

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on August 8, 2003

Hi Sherry,
All that I can say is,
BRAVOOOO!!!!

Excellent job on this.

Hugs,
Trixie :)

Reviewed by g g (Reader)

Reviewed on August 7, 2003

What a fabulous response to the challenge
Whew ;)
Excellent write
Hugs
Lady G.

Reviewed by Catherine N (Reader)

Reviewed on August 6, 2003

Such sensuous passion..Outstanding write!!
Cathy

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 5, 2003

Beautiful, passionate write and great response to the challenge.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on August 4, 2003

Sherry, an excellent erotic response to Sanil's challenge. Bill

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Oh my Sherry! This is wonderful erotic. It's beautiful, elegant, passionate. The rhyme and flow are perfect and flow like a song. An excellent response to the challenge
Love
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)

Awesome!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

This is erotic perfection!

Reviewed by Jack Roberts

WOW! Wonderful write Sherry! Beautiful rhyme! ~Whew~ Is it hot in here?! Somebody open a window!!

Jack

Reviewed by Jackie Brooks

WOW is right, I am blushing all over, fantastic - phewwww.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on August 3, 2003

Wow..Beautifully sensual and so romantic, excellent response to Sanil's challenge!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Barry Weeder (Reader)