Much Joy! Much to be said!
Oh this overwhelming movement
Like the movement of the river
Rolling faster and stronger as
it gets to it's destination
rolling over the rocks
sticks and other opsticles
But it stays on course to
it's home , Does this sound
familiar to you?Kind of like
what we try and do in our faith
isn't it. Trying to stay on our journey
even with rocks, etc. unitl
we are home in Gods loving arms
Wow, this is really a "moving" poem- the lines are mobile and fast-paced, and it gets the reader in motion, mentally. I like it very much and the style is great too.
Cynthia