Oh sweet lady how my heart beats for it tells of a love ,a wonderful love ,a love that was formed a long time ago in the heavens above .That love is what I have for you my dearest lady so pure so strong it will always carry you through your dark days and comfort your nights .It will raise you up when times are bad make you smile when you are lonely, this is a wondrous love for you my darling only .My soul rejoices with the news I am indeed a lucky man to have found such a love as you give me. Oh my darling our parting causes so much pain, oh dear god bring us together again so as we shall never part, to go forward with love in our hearts, I love you so as I know you do me, so why are we so far apart only you can mend my breaking heart .Oh please take good care of it never let it die or we will be doomed my love and we shall surely die so rejoice now my love I know that we will be in love forever. Sweetheart take my hand and let us walk together in eternity never to be parted again so our hearts at last are one and we will be at peace with this world thank you my love for sharing it with me.
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Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2004
Colin the sentiments of love in this prose are beautiful! The only thing I see that I will comment on is the BLOCKING of it I feel may detract from it some? I like the versified version of and free flow of the romantic poem. Not necessarily completely structured, but with the feel of naturalness. What do you and the others think?
Bill Murray
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