to the point and totally correct ... i agree with Flora's assessment ...
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 20, 2004
Hi Hank....well yes I agree....except...there
is enough arguing going on here right now...
I think there are some who may reject this idea..
and feel hurt...I mentioned a typo yesterday to
a friend who had a great poem...I do typos all the time..
and she was happy I told her...I wanted to see her
poem perfect...and when someone tells me I receive
with gratitude...problem is ...some are so very touchy...
some like to give out advice but won't take it without
getting an attitude...let's face it...No writer is
perfect...a little honing here and there to make the
poem better...WOW...who wouldn't want that?...Isn't that
why we are here? Andre has made remarkable suggestions to
me...He is so great about it all....well....let's see if
anyone is interested...loved your idea...and you need no
help with this one....:) floria
Hey Henry.
I so love grinches and I can see your point,
but too many pinches might tend to disappoint
those with thinner skins. What I would love to see?
Community dens for folks like you and me.
We'd join, circle round just once a month or so,
critiques galore found, nowhere but up to go.
Dawn
If you do that then they take offense and get mad..I tend to crit my own..most of the time I know when they stink..afterall I'm the one that wrote them!
Write on! Lisa
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is enough arguing going on here right now...
I think there are some who may reject this idea..
and feel hurt...I mentioned a typo yesterday to
a friend who had a great poem...I do typos all the time..
and she was happy I told her...I wanted to see her
poem perfect...and when someone tells me I receive
with gratitude...problem is ...some are so very touchy...
some like to give out advice but won't take it without
getting an attitude...let's face it...No writer is
perfect...a little honing here and there to make the
poem better...WOW...who wouldn't want that?...Isn't that
why we are here? Andre has made remarkable suggestions to
me...He is so great about it all....well....let's see if
anyone is interested...loved your idea...and you need no
help with this one....:) floria
I so love grinches and I can see your point,
but too many pinches might tend to disappoint
those with thinner skins. What I would love to see?
Community dens for folks like you and me.
We'd join, circle round just once a month or so,
critiques galore found, nowhere but up to go.
Dawn
Write on! Lisa