A ripple from
the distant shore
surrounded me, Etching
a place
in a void hidden
in my lost words,
where man can only
be recognized
in the heart
of a woman.
We transcended
to the stars
on an early
Sunday morning.
So cavalier
to all those around us,
we made love
on the hidden pages
found floating
in a bottle,
amidst a tempestuous
sea.
Passion has its price to pay.
You slipped away from me
under a cloudless sky,
standing alone
to fight the darkness
with every muscle
in your body.
The strength of your faith
holds strong,
forgiveness found
in a whisper.
Mercy falls
with the rain.
Freedom and bells will ring,
filling the space
endured in that hour.
All that you succumb to
will fall below your feet.
What is twisted apart
will be made whole again.
Venus,
I see you in the twilight,
in the distance
on a twinkling shore.
This is a dedication to Sherry. A dear friend who writes poetry. She has an illness that keeps her away from all of us who need her wonderful words. Tim
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Reviewed by Mandy
Reviewed on August 17, 2002
Oh how sweet,this is about my mom,this is the nicest dedication I've ever read.Thanks so much for caring about her!!! Wonderful art!!!
Reviewed by Soft Silence
Reviewed on August 16, 2002
I am in awe ofthis most beautiful and sweet dedication to me from such a talented poet as you are Tim. I'm speechless. It's such a gentle, sad and moving poem. Thank You....now look, I'm crying again. You have touched me so deeply. Thank you with all my hart. Such talent Tim~ superb~~*
sherry* ~You are an Angel to me~
Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)
Reviewed on August 16, 2002
touching tribute tinged with the inner sorrow your lyrics have become accustomed to carrying. **Mari**
Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2002
Awww,
Tim, we don't know her but she is all a part of us...! I will pray for this sweet precious soul of light. And what an earth angel you are to think of her..!Sherry...... that is such a beautiful name..
Jo
Reviewed by Tiana (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2002
A beautiful dedication to a special friend, Tim. Wonderfully written...
Reviewed by Brigit Erineyes (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2002
You honor her..this write is delicate yet the imagery fills the senses.
Brigit~
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2002
Deeply touching and such a lovely tribute to your special friend. I enjoy your work so much, Tim.
Reviewed by Patricia Boudreau (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2002
This is so beautiful..." What is twisted apart
will be made whole again."
those lines just "held"... incredible piece...
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sherry* ~You are an Angel to me~
Tim, we don't know her but she is all a part of us...! I will pray for this sweet precious soul of light. And what an earth angel you are to think of her..!Sherry...... that is such a beautiful name..
Jo
Brigit~
will be made whole again."
those lines just "held"... incredible piece...