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The Rain
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Maybe it was the rain,
that brought in these hard times.

Shaking off these blues
so I can get back to me and you,
I see us dancing in the sun.
I can feel your every move.

I stumbled into your life,
like a child at his first dance.
Explaining, ever so elegantly,
how I felt, trying not to overwhelm you.

Your eyes look into me,
pushing me forward.
I can’t fall down.
I look behind me and you are there.

Have the dark shadows worn you down my love?
The fear is all around,
attacks hitting from all sides.
I fight them off in the silence.

I pull you close to me,
for without you I would so easily crumble
the voice of doubt brings on these fears.
I still feel the pain when you are not near.

When the lights are out,
and a blanket of stars lies high above us,
having you all to myself,
I find the peace to sleep.

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 Reviews of "The Rain"
Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
Reviewed on May 12, 2003
I enjoyed how you captured how love is not always a bed of roses while still appreciating love's immortal beauty. Very nice.

Reviewed by Carol Williams
Reviewed on September 15, 2002
sweet, lovely romantic images...takes the reader there. An enjoyable trip :)

Reviewed by Robert JudeAce
Reviewed on September 8, 2002
romantic images...

Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)
Reviewed on September 7, 2002
touching downpour, Iron Man **Mari**

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on September 6, 2002
Another beautiful and romantic write, Tim.. I just love your work...
Hug Shannon for me....
Jenni

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 6, 2002
very beautifully done Tim...so sensitive and lovely

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 6, 2002
So softly calming and romantic. Just lovely!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on September 6, 2002
9-06-02

Dream's Are...

TRASK

Reviewed by Madame X (Reader)
Reviewed on September 6, 2002
Tom, this was exceptional. Soothing, romantic piece here.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on September 6, 2002
Beautiful poetry. Each stanza was a joy to read.

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on September 6, 2002
Beautiful poem. I especially liked

"I stumbled into your life,
like a child at his first dance."

Very romantic image.

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on September 6, 2002
This was beautiful!

Reviewed by Gumby
Reviewed on September 6, 2002
Tim this is grand
a true romantic poem
you have quite a way with words

Oh by the way if you want to center a poem
the word center has to be enclosed by <>
like this <center> same goes if you want it bold <B> or italics <I>


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