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Like a Child.
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Like a child
I fell into your arms
and told you what my heart concealed.

Like a child
I clung to you, afraid
that you would leave me with my tears.

Like a child
I sat down on the floor
and cried away the things that hurt.

Like a child
I hid myself away
until it felt safe coming out to see.

Like a child,
I watched with wonder
those who smiled for real and didn't cry.

Like a child,
I leaned back on you,
before I tried to stand alone,
I swear I tried it on my own
and then fell back onto the floor
like that's where fools like me belong
and thats where fear like mine belongs
and that's where I crouched in the quiet dark
and silence of the peaceful park
apart from one lone broken sound
of a fool-girl crying on the ground.

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 Reviews of "Like a Child."
Reviewed by Dan
Reviewed on April 20, 2003
Frankly.
Scary

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2003
Nicely expressed feelings. Being Childlike can be a very good thing in love and life. ~Joseph

Reviewed by Brittany Renée
Reviewed on March 14, 2003
Nice weaving of emotions, clear yet webbed.

Warm Love,
*-Brittany-*

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 14, 2003
Some children are happy.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 14, 2003
Charlotte,
This is excellent.
Peg

Reviewed by Jesus
Reviewed on March 14, 2003
This was full of thought and feeling darlin, it really does tell a moving story. Well done Charley.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 14, 2003
Finely done. [except for the fear]
I'm glad I stopped by and I enjoyed reading your work.
~E


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