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Charley
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Vision is much more than sight and all my strength can be so slight, and all my fears don't seem so bad, I'm Charley- so I don't get sad. True love is much more than care, a loneliness when you're not there, there's meaning in my life today, I'm Charley- and I'm still okay. I've seen blood you never knew existed in a tear or two, a hidden blade, a subtle flame, I'm Charley- I don't feel the pain. I'm a girl you'll never know, in all our years I'll never show, the way you really make me feel, because I'm Charley- I'm not real.

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Reviewed by Claire Shaw (Reader)

Reviewed on May 12, 2003

ur so gud at this

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on May 1, 2003

Nice rhyme and meter and well expressed thoughts. I'm human ... so I do get sad and I do feel pain and that makes me real, and that's okay. ~Joseph

Reviewed by Jamez Michael (Reader)

Reviewed on April 29, 2003

this is wicked!
good one tracle :-)
jammy xxx

Reviewed by Dan

Reviewed on April 29, 2003

all from 1 line? Strnage but yet amazing

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

EXCELLANT WRITE...says it all!!!!
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

This is stunning work
peggy

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

You're Charley, and you are a goooooooood poet. Bravo.

Reviewed by Brittany Ren�e

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

Wow! I love the rhyme in this. It honestly flows off the page and off your tongue! Brilliant. I like the humbleness yet confidence in this poem of yourself. I especially adore the last stanza. I may be wrong, but I think a lot of girls our age feel like that, well, at least I know I do! I don't show myself clearly to many... if any, people. Brilliant write. Look forward to many more... if they can top this!

Warm Love
*-Brittany-*

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

You're Charley, and I'm glad you are.
As a poem, this had great meter, Charley. Well done. As far as you go... you are a light in this Den; we are lucky to have you.
-James

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

Awesome write!

Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by Dr X

Reviewed on April 27, 2003

Wow! This is unbelievable charl, I don't know if everyone else will think the same thing, but this poem really does say everything. This is undoubtedly the best you've ever written, there's no topping this.

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