Well tuned piano playing it again Sam.... Dream world helping me forget who I am.... Slow fan turning, churning smoky air.... Cool martini takes me away to where I just don't care.... In walks another dreamer and saunters to the bar.... Checking the room out quickly he knows that he's the star.... When our eyes meet finally he winks - I see his dimple.... In my dream world romance blooms; in real life not that simple....
Excellent imagery, I could imagine being there, excellent descriptive poetry!
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Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 19, 2004
Great to see something coming out of your beautiful and intelligent self. This was right up my alley. Loved those "odies but goodies," also. You put me there with this little gem. Thanks.
A story set in 10 years time where two bodies are found in the river NITH in Dumfries, south west Scotland. One is a blind musician and police informant while the other is Poppy, a young girl. It brings Mark and Carla together with different views i
(can you tell i have been watching the olympics? LOL)
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