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Alone in the Dark
by David Blair → (All Poetry by David Blair)
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She left me,
the love of my life.
I lost my job
and marriage needs money
to oil over difficulties.
Now I had so little.

She caught a train
to the City.
I never hear from her
or our kid.
That breaks my heart
alone in the dark.

I lie in the night
thinking terrible thoughts
how to end the misery.
And as if to mock me
I hear the Central train
on the hour...every long hour.

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Alone in the Dark"
Reviewed by Joy Hale
Reviewed on September 23, 2012
I hope this poem is just an expression of your poetic license and has not happened to you in reality for it is just too sad to imagine. I am sending happiness and blessings your way.

Joy L. Hale

Reviewed on August 9, 2010
Stabs like a knife to the heart.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 7, 2010
powerfully emotive ...

Reviewed on August 7, 2010
David,

This is so sad, and a commentary on how the economy can destroy people's lives. But more than that, I can feel your deep pain at losing your loved ones. This brought a tear to my eye. I'm sorry for your loss.

Mary

Reviewed by pat medlin
Reviewed on August 7, 2010
heart pierceing piece...write write write

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 7, 2010
So direct and honest, David.
Take good care.

John

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on August 6, 2010
Haunting and sad. Great writing though. I'm sure the minutes seem like hours. Transform the pain into words. Magical things will happen. Don't listen to your head too much. I've been through this myself. Absent the trains.

Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd
Reviewed on August 6, 2010
a sad poem, David. I hope it didn't happen to you. Laurel


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