I love your style-however, the scansion could be tickled up a little. If you 'count the beats' as you read the lines, it can help alot.
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This is in no way a stick to beat your poem with, no! The story, the sentiment and the flow of thoughts going into this piece are very nice indeed. And another poet is born.