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The Temptation of St. Damon
by Patricia Gomes → (All Poetry by Patricia Gomes)
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Between the gaps of the palm fronds,
I took your measure.
Estimated the hands-length
from shoulder-to-shoulder,
lingered over the knot of muscle,
trailed your spine with a phantom fingernail,
and hungrily traced your lips with my tongue.
I took your measure,

liking what I saw.

Behind the screen of blue smoke,
by the flicker of potted torches,
I listened as you spoke,
inserting an accent
because I wanted you to have one;
you should have one.
The depth in your eyes,
so very dark,
calls to my soul in island patois
and drums pound rhythms
to match my heady exhalations.

Beyond the shadows of black tie dancers,
I gauged your motions.
Every languid movement
lionesque—a promise
of sleep-inducing climax.
You never stumbled,
never faltered,
never once
hesitated
and I heard the roar
you would bring
to the dark
after the last notes had played.

Liking what I saw,
I walked away, leaving you nameless ...
until now.



© 2004


 

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 Reviews of "The Temptation of St. Damon"
Reviewed by richard poor
Reviewed on June 18, 2005
it makes me crazee...dreamy!

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on May 1, 2004
ahhhh...this was a sensual delight, one of those little fantasies, much done but little revealed. Splendid composition and flow in this.

Reviewed by M Flack
Reviewed on April 9, 2004
I especially liked this line...

"traced your lips with my tongue."

Wow, very hot...

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2004
Pat this poem would make anyone roar, lion, man, mouse or flea. Anyone looking to the sky for his soul. And please tell all these other guys to lay off. I spotted you first. Your magnificence always shines through. Hugs Bill
p.s. Happy Easter Lady Patricia

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on April 8, 2004
AWESOME! BRAVO!

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on April 8, 2004
a very nice vignette
Well done!

john+

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2004
This is incredible poetry, Pat! I like everything about it.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on April 7, 2004
wow! is right,
this is and outstanding
and profound piece
Excellent write

William

Reviewed on April 7, 2004
Wow..this was outstanding! Excellent and beautiful poetry,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 7, 2004
Wow! You were sorely tempted!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2004
Pat this is one of your best...remarkable
writing....powerful ... just superb....
you always knock me over with your writing..
But this one is special...floria

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 7, 2004
Another awesome post, from an awesome poetess!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2004
Damn Ted! Sorry so-and-so. Stole MY thunder. Said what I wanted to say. Well, let me just opine with, You, dear, are in a class all alone. Uh, huh. You are atop the literary mountain. You are Wonder Woman of wordly pursuits. Damn Ted!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on April 7, 2004
I nearly missed this because of your name change. P., Eileen is right when she says you should rule. Reading one of your poems is one of the most pleasurable things I could do in life. Each and every time I am inspired as well as awed by your creations.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2004
This is excellent..... Love the last stanza perfection.

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2004
Patricia, this is FANTASTIC! This write has so many great descriptions, so many outstanding metaphors, and possesses such a wry and self-assured voice... you can actually "hear" these thoughts flow through the protagonist's mind!

Love this bit:
"Beyond the shadows of black tie dancers,
I gauged your motions.
Every languid movement
lionesque—a promise
of sleep-inducing climax."

Yas...oh yas. A superb write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 6, 2004
Pat you always floor me, and this one just blew me away!
With such command you should rule the oceans!;-)


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