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The Gift of Love
by Zech Romero → (All Poetry by Zech Romero)
Saturday, February 6, 2016    Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Submerged forever in tides of time
tossed asunder heartless storms 
promises by wishy washy woman
washed ashore dead lifeless 
 
Drowned deep beneath the black
caught by currents of loneliness
Broken and lost to oceans of tears 
sea shell sheltering my sunken fears
 
Many nights strife to save her life 
truly my life is what was spared
unearthed my undead heart for her
the only one to display she cared
 
A light shown through the depth
And lo there appeared my mistress
offered her hand rescued from death
She grants loves gift my Vampiress
 
Now I grant her my eternal love
here I give you what is mine
I give to you the gift the honor
of being my first valentine

 


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 Reviews of "The Gift of Love"
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on March 22, 2016
'Broken and lost to oceans of tears'----BEAUTIFUL!!!!...'my undead heart for her'--- TALENTED!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 7, 2016
I certainly didn't like the last line, making it a Valentine. The underwater metaphor makes good sense and I like it. The reference to her as a vampire was a turnoff for me.

Ron

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on February 6, 2016
Great ending, you led up to that really well. I like the flow and the addition of different sea-related words in the first few stanzas as it tied it together nice. Good stuff :)


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