Oh, eyes...dear eyes...why have you forsaken me?
you have done nothing but lie to me
...in fact, you are the lie
Many days, evenings and nights you have looked
at me with total compassion
...saying, I love you
And will do so...not just today and tomorrow but
forever...you have hurt me
...so bad that I no longer
Want my eyes...nor do I want anyone else to possess
them...oh, how I wish that I was blind...or
should I be angry with myself
...because I am blind?
copyright; Asa D Seeley/2009
Anna
I do so love the tone of this marvellous literary portrait ...and ending with the question of self doubt - Inspirational!
You are talented and gifted, Asa, and never never give up on life nor on writing; more, please, from your strong voice.
John
I found this poem very interesting! Keep on writing my
friend, soon and very soon you will see with your eyes,
your gift making room for you, be encouraged!
Much Love
Always!!
Janet xx
Good job Asa.
Georg