EVERYONE'S WISH (poem) by Asa D. Seeley on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 25, 2012

Well said.. i truely wish that sometimes we could turn back the hands of the clock!...M

Reviewed on August 19, 2012

Score! and I agree with Steve, and Ron and whoever else, I would break that dang rewind button. Well done Asa, well done. Be well, Kathy

Reviewed by Steve Ralph

Reviewed on June 7, 2012

Nicely put, but like Ronald Hull my life would be spent hitting the rewind button.
Steve

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on April 15, 2012

THERE IS NOT ONE HUMAN BEING ALIVE WHO CANNOT RELATE TO THIS WORK...WE HAVE ALL DONE THINGS THAT WE WISH WE COULD FIX BY REWINDING OUR LIVES AND DOING IT OVER. WELL DONE, SON...SO WELL DONE! THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer

Reviewed on March 23, 2012

Honest and true..... Great to meet you here Dear Asa!!!

Love and Gratitude,

Suzie xox :-)

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on March 21, 2012

Oh yes indeed my friend we all wish that most times as this sure is a write we all can relate to and the photo suits this perfectly Laura

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 19, 2012

succinct thought provoker ...

Reviewed by Michael Jones

Reviewed on March 19, 2012

What we be is what others see thank God for forgiveness. Apatly written! Peace!!!

Reviewed by Ruan Mills

Reviewed on March 19, 2012

Of course! That's what we need! You hit the nail right on the head.
We could put sooo much to rights.

Reviewed by Carol Mitchell

Reviewed on March 18, 2012

Yes, we do!

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

Reviewed on March 18, 2012

simply stated. great poem.

Reviewed by T Jett (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2012

I wish I could sometimes, Asa. A great write! :)

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on March 10, 2012

It is a shame one cannot still pause and rewind...mistakes could be dubbed over with successes without having to repeat them

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 10, 2012

Your poem is so well written! My thoughts and prayers are with you,and I hope you continue to post your poems here.

Eileen

Reviewed by pat medlin

Reviewed on March 10, 2012

procative is a weak word to use for these words...and my knee-jerk reaction is to say a soft tentative...'maybe'

for if i did a rewind past the 'good bad ugly uglier and downright dirtydog' parts i wouldn't have much to have learned from...and less to put to paper

welcome to AD...i look forward to reading more...pmedlin

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on March 10, 2012

OMG! Loved the picture...it says so much...and your words resonate the thoughts of this reader for certain...keep writing, Asa, and keep moving forward....

Anna

Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd

Reviewed on March 9, 2012

A few sharp words that say a lot.

I hope you will soon recover from your disappointment in love. It's a great big world out there. Rainbows

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on March 6, 2012

You say much with few words Asa, bless you!

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on March 6, 2012

Asa

If you want to be a real life all action figure you have to stop depending on your own resources, and turn to God for his infinite resources

Peter

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 5, 2012

Substance to reflect upon, Asa. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on March 5, 2012

I'd be so busy rewinding I wouldn't have a life. Groundhog Day all over again.

Ron

Reviewed by Janna Hill

Reviewed on March 5, 2012

To be able to pause and rewind... Yeah, I think most people can relate Asa.

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on March 5, 2012

Welcome to the Ad Asa. To embrace the reality of actions.
well done ~ wishing you the best for your writing career.
Lady Mary Ann