Asa, first of all, I like your use of colors in your formatting. This is a clever poem, which could be interpreted as an editorial about complacence. I like it just as it is, though! At least until Harvest Time!
Five years have passed. The sequel to the award-winning Chapel of Eternal Love, this book revisits the same couples in the first book, and where the lives have taken them since they left the altar at The Chapel of Eternal Love
A homonymless man writes shows what it's like to look up the laid he skirts when you’re lying prone(d) to the sidewalk, beer / joint / needle dangling from your hand /lips / arm.
Connie
Ron
Nicely done, Asa.