But sometimes silence is so thick and heavy that you almost can hear it. However,
in the modern world we are seldom away from some sort of noice. Total silence
is almost unnerving because we aren't prepared for it. Interesting concept here anyway.
I like this. [btw: I hate rating, and so my norm is an 8.] It feels like the color white and like silence feels. it is also very pertinent and says a lot about communication, or rather, about how not communicating makes me feel.
oooo Annette, I love this, especially the last line, it wraps it up nicely. Janet
Reviewed by Jozette Aaron (Reader)
Reviewed on January 8, 2002
Lovely poem Annette. Great visuals as I read.
Thanks for sharing!
Reviewed by David Hale
Reviewed on January 8, 2002
I can also say that I have never heard silence. I think if I were able to hear total silence it would be deafening. D.L. Hale author of "If I Were An Eagle Bkko One" www.eaglewriter.com
Silence can be very loud, very telling. When someone acquiesces--just follows through without telling you. Or when one is being ignored. That's deadening silence!
Loved the poem. Loved the metaphor that silence is like "newly laid snow." Every writer can relate to it! Thank you, Annette!
Reviewed by Carolyn Howard-Johnson
Author of "This is the Place" and
"Harkening: A Collection of Stories Remembered."
Reviewed by dehanna bailee (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2002
I can't hear the silence.....
but sometimes....you can see it.
great poem
dehanna
Reviewed by Kristie Maguire (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2002
Excellent! I love your poetry.
Kristie Leigh Maguire,
author of Emails from the Edge, Desert Triangle, contributor to Calliope's Mousepad: Women Writers Online
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Annette. You are so modest about much of the
stuff you do.
I like this piece very much.
in the modern world we are seldom away from some sort of noice. Total silence
is almost unnerving because we aren't prepared for it. Interesting concept here anyway.
Thanks for sharing!
Loved the poem. Loved the metaphor that silence is like "newly laid snow." Every writer can relate to it! Thank you, Annette!
Reviewed by Carolyn Howard-Johnson
Author of "This is the Place" and
"Harkening: A Collection of Stories Remembered."
but sometimes....you can see it.
great poem
dehanna
Kristie Leigh Maguire,
author of Emails from the Edge, Desert Triangle, contributor to Calliope's Mousepad: Women Writers Online