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Silence
by Annette Gisby → (All Poetry by Annette Gisby)
  
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They say silence is golden,
But sometimes it's white

The blank white page
With no words to fill it

The blank computer screen
With no characters formed

The newly laid snow
With no footprints on it

The white clouds above
With no hint of blue

The ice-cream in your hand
Melting slowly as you devour it.

Silence is white and cold and neverending.
I can't hear the silence.

Copyright 2002 Annette Gisby.


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 Reviews of "Silence"
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on October 17, 2003
I was happily surprised to find your poetry,
Annette. You are so modest about much of the
stuff you do.
I like this piece very much.

Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
Reviewed on August 30, 2003
But sometimes silence is so thick and heavy that you almost can hear it. However,
in the modern world we are seldom away from some sort of noice. Total silence
is almost unnerving because we aren't prepared for it. Interesting concept here anyway.

Reviewed by Tova Gabrielle
Reviewed on July 13, 2002
I like this. [btw: I hate rating, and so my norm is an 8.] It feels like the color white and like silence feels. it is also very pertinent and says a lot about communication, or rather, about how not communicating makes me feel.

Reviewed by Lawrance Lux
Reviewed on March 1, 2002
Quality fare.

Reviewed by Mark Carroll
Reviewed on February 25, 2002
It's Great. Thanks for the read.

Reviewed by Afrika Abney
Reviewed on February 1, 2002
A nice visual piece with nice rhtyhm and words.Lovely piece

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on January 8, 2002
oooo Annette, I love this, especially the last line, it wraps it up nicely. Janet

Reviewed by Jozette Aaron (Reader)
Reviewed on January 8, 2002
Lovely poem Annette. Great visuals as I read.

Thanks for sharing!

Reviewed by David Hale
Reviewed on January 8, 2002
I can also say that I have never heard silence. I think if I were able to hear total silence it would be deafening. D.L. Hale author of "If I Were An Eagle Bkko One" www.eaglewriter.com

Reviewed on January 7, 2002
Silence can be very loud, very telling. When someone acquiesces--just follows through without telling you. Or when one is being ignored. That's deadening silence!
Loved the poem. Loved the metaphor that silence is like "newly laid snow." Every writer can relate to it! Thank you, Annette!

Reviewed by Carolyn Howard-Johnson
Author of "This is the Place" and
"Harkening: A Collection of Stories Remembered."

Reviewed by dehanna bailee (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2002
I can't hear the silence.....

but sometimes....you can see it.
great poem

dehanna

Reviewed by Kristie Maguire (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2002
Excellent! I love your poetry.

Kristie Leigh Maguire,
author of Emails from the Edge, Desert Triangle, contributor to Calliope's Mousepad: Women Writers Online


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