He lives in a world only he knows--
a world of others' thrown-asides.
A dented pot with no handle
is a perfectly good pot,
and to find it is to find treasure.
He is a child in the body of a man,
for he never was a real child.
Real children are loved, not abandoned.
Real children are cradled, not raped.
Real children can trust. He cannot.
He does the best he can,
and he keeps his dreams
in hidden places no one can find.
They are all he has
that cannot be taken from him.
"I can survive," he says
with the pride of one who has
survived too much.
But survival is a dark forest
and he cannot see the sky.
we must work our way out from the dense foliage of life's estranged experiences to see the clearing ahead ...
excellent work!
Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2004
This last stanza really captures the way it feels to be broken by circumstances beyond your control and the struggle to keep going. Well-written piece.
Yes, I agree, some children are stronger than others, for they learn the technique to be emotionally strong and survive through the darkest place without love.
In my eyes, these children are special children, and their strength for survival are specially-gifted by God. These children are to be admired for they grow wings and learn to fly themselves.
~ Sandie May Angel :o) ~
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2004
Children always pay the highest price.. Excellent poem.
A homonymless man writes shows what it's like to look up the laid he skirts when you’re lying prone(d) to the sidewalk, beer / joint / needle dangling from your hand /lips / arm.
excellent work!
This is heartfelt write indeed!!!!!
Yes, I agree, some children are stronger than others, for they learn the technique to be emotionally strong and survive through the darkest place without love.
In my eyes, these children are special children, and their strength for survival are specially-gifted by God. These children are to be admired for they grow wings and learn to fly themselves.
~ Sandie May Angel :o) ~