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By Diane C. Hundertmark

the world is spinning 'round and changing

my life is spinning out and changing

.whirling

turning

at an ever faster speed

more and more

forward --backward

up

and

down

making me ill and tired

unable to talk or think

and yet

there you are

quite and sedate

warm and strong

your arms around me

slowing

my spinning down

your hands

smoothing

the exhaustion from my mind

your words whispered

slowing

the world's spinning 'round

your eyes

drawing

out my thoughts

freeing

my soul

�

Copyrighted 1981

Saturday, August 31, 2002

This was written to my husband many years ago for our anniversary.

Now I have given it a Title.

Now that we are going to be at one of those important number of years anniversary this year, I think I may be giving this to him again.

It fits very well since NOW I have fully recovered from the accident I had in 2006 that took me away from writing for time.

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Reviewed by Regis Schilken

Reviewed on August 4, 2013

Happy Anniversary! This next one will be #47 for me and I would have it no other way.

Problem is, one of us must leave before the other ...

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on April 14, 2012

Oh my...this one is old...originally written in 1981? That goes back a long time to be apt still. Excellent work.
Amor

Reviewed by Paul Judges

Reviewed on December 16, 2009

Unique layout....well written, Diane.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on September 25, 2009

It's great to have someone to catch us when we need them to. We're lucky if we have that. I like the style of this poem. You give a feeling of falling (spinning) out of control. Nicely penned:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on May 11, 2009

Beautiful! Interesting way you put this together. I enjoyed reading it and I'm sure your husband will love it. Good job.

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on January 30, 2009

It's rather nice, I think. Some people are kites & others are rocks. Both are important. :)

Reviewed by John Domino

Reviewed on September 27, 2008

Very creative!

God Bless,

JMD

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on July 26, 2008

Great to have you online again. A spinning world you presented to us. Things should fall into place woon with the anniversary to celebrate this year. Enjoyable write. Hope hubby loves it. A nice present.

Reviewed by Micha Julian

Reviewed on April 8, 2003

yes!
Oh, and the form...so much relate, just waiting for the "you"...WONDERFUL, really love that you spun it, literally onto the screen, and what it 'means', oh, yes! +++++
michele

Reviewed by Nickolaus Pacione

Reviewed on October 20, 2002

not too shabby -- damn, never realized you have a classic here.

Reviewed by Peter Benson

Reviewed on October 4, 2002

Impressive

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 31, 2002

oh, this is indeed nice!! loved this!!

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