spiritual not by any of my merit, but I feel connected to the wind that causes my hair to get stuck to my lips I feel weightless like an understanding of the peace that rests both in this moment and the future this life is a dream.
I can picture the movement throughout this very expressive piece of poetry. It's moves me in the right direction to want to write a continuation and a happy ending. Well done!
Certainly a wonderful way to feel as free as the wind. A youthful expression. Something that sometimes leaves us when the heavy burden of life bears down. But a remembrance of is always welcome.
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Ron