It has come to my attention
That it’s time for intervention
My recent poetic inventions
Were penned with one intention
To address evil slanderous lies
And look my accuser square in the eyes
I am aware I’m up for judgment
And have aroused too much attention
I do not entertain delusions
I know my strengths and weaknesses
(and writing poetry is one of them- the latter)
I do not judge others
I do not berate their artistic expressions
I have a firmer grasp on reality than any of you know
I’m not a great poet. I certainly know it.
But a person must start somewhere for skill and talent to grow
I know my faults better than anyone
I address them every day
I do not think I’m famous
From celebrity- I’m very far away
I sup at the devil’s table
Of this I’m acutely aware
But I had a talk with Jesus-
And for now- he doesn’t care
Because I’m trapped inside a world, right now
In this great country of ours
Where everything has a price tag
And you must sell all with a smile
Our hopes, our dreams our talent our beings
Are the things we give in trade
To live a life of fairy tales
And carry on this great charade
I love everyone and I do not want to spar
I do not wish to change what any of you are
I appreciate all for the way you walk your path
I drink in every poem and story
At times I cry and at times I laugh
We’re all here for the same thing (I think)
To see and to be seen
And we shouldn’t be afraid to risk our self esteem
However . . .
I do not tolerate disrespect
Or attacks upon my intellect
And I will stomp shrews
And smack grizzleys right between the eyes
Blue, I COULDN'T say it any better. I know your poetry is GOOD. .
Love,
Deb
Hear ye' Hear ye'
I got your number!
To be honest what your saying in a few words is
I got to be ME! I got to be Me!
What else can I be etc.
I love your heartfelt write!
Be YOU!
WArmly, Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
P.s I haven't been here in awhile, but I have my gin and tonic and water by my side, and I plan on staying, for a few........
Brett
It is always sad when people can't cut to the chase and see the moment for what it is. Too many hearts get wounded. Of course then change is always met with resistance; for with every action there is an equal and opposite reaction.
Some people refuse to grow outside of their own personal delusions; too many die in the bubble they have created for themselves. And if growth ever came, their lives would have to change. Sadly, many are unwilling to change.
Sometimes people are afraid to change because in the process they lose much of what they have built for themselves. I have personally been in this place twice in my life. Neither time was any fun, but I'll be damned if I didn't grow and get better.
You are writing with a strength and focus and candor that is refreshing Blue. Keep walking into the Light.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
say it
write it
do it.....
got strength here
You need any help, just give me a yelp!
Smiles!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Ted
Edwin
Or attacks upon my intellect
I'm with you 100%. I'll help with the stomping and smacking of bozos who show disrespect. You can't help but pity their ignorance.
Rusty
Fee