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AGO
by Blue Sleighty → (All Poetry by Blue Sleighty)
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About trying to sort out life without hurting anyone.

I woke one morning to a whisper

From the breath of magic itself

And into my ear a message crept but soft

 

Mystery, it said, with drama in its hiss,

May land wherever it choose . . .

I wondered what the hell it meant by this

 

I rose from my bed to see the morning sunshine

It colored all things yellow that lay within my realm,

And colored gold what sparkled within the dew

 

Like the golden wash of a great idea

Spread forth from a painters brush

So very cheery, I thought with unusual calm

 

Outside two stray terriers frolicked in the grass

They tugged and dragged a shining cloak

The color of the sun

 

They drug it to my doorstep placed at the threshold where I stood

Tilted frisky heads together in wait

Of praise for what they’d done

 

The cloth was fine and bejeweled

With stones and threads of gold

I sensed a pattern in it. I threw the dogs a bone

 

Off and away they scampered

Vanishing over a horizon that looked rather odd to me

Like something that didn’t belong there. On that picture perfect morn

 

What does one do with a cloak? I thought as I sought to put it to it’s use

Is it to bring one warmth, or perhaps to hide one away from view?

And once beneath the beautiful exterior , a whole new answer did ensue

 

You lured me beneath you

Though your presence wasn’t near

And now for once what lay behind me was perfectly clear

 

Beneath the cloak a place lay

Where one could solve a puzzle game

Without the gaze of others whose pointing fingers hand out blame

 

Beneath here we can visit where we are forbidden now to go

To face the vile and villains

And make peace in worlds we left long ago

 

 

 

Because we’d best not hurt them that we go there.

 

 
 
 
 
 


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 Reviews of "AGO"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 6, 2007
excellent piece that captured my imagination ...

Reviewed by J AG
Reviewed on September 5, 2007
a piece so well written it read like the passionate caress from a weathered hand. each image unique, yet so very much connected to the other, cleverly sewn literary linen blowing majestically on the virtual wind. for this most wonderful gift on and off the page, thank you.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 4, 2007
'without hurting anyone'

Yes ... this is assuredly a prerequisite isn' it Blue, especially in a world that worships violence, and were too many gouge each others souls. Making peace in yesterdays dung heaps frees the heart and soul to move on and up into new and refreshing seasons.

This is a fine piece of poetry filled with superb imagery and the writers personal revelations.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
How often I've wished to have such a cloak. To escape, feel safe or to not hurt someone I love just because I am 'out-to-lunch' or discombobulated.

Made me wish for it, again.

Kathy

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
This cloak is such a metaphorical safety blanket and as this poem unfulded like a dream it signifies or could signify so much in the poets mind. A lover, a friend, a child it doesn't matter but it does matter that someone does care and you know they are there for you to help you through.

Fee

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
Truly a contemplative piece, Blue. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
Blue, excellent and thought provoking pen. Good on you.

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on September 3, 2007
A tree of peace where one can sit in the shade while the river of life flows by. Enjoyed


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