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Transplant
by Blue Sleighty → (All Poetry by Blue Sleighty)
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I knew this girl one time

 


We were young together

 


From the same side of the tracks

 


The wrong side

 


The harshness of life showed there

 


On every cheaply built structure

 


And on every barely living soul

 


The minimization effort

 


To make it all appear otherwise

 


Was abandoned a long time ago

 


No one there cared anymore

 


Especially about what those

 


Who only care about how our presence


Affected them


Thought and said

 


This girl that I knew

 


A product of nature

 


She sought

 


To make her world alright

 


Interesting to observe how she went about it

 


She blamed her dad for all that was wrong

 


And praised her mother

 


Dead and gone

 


For anything she thought was right

 


“No matter from where the seed come

 


It’s the one who tend the field

 


Nourish the fruit

 


What you become and what you do

 


Depends, largely

 


On where you take root

 


And who the hell is watering the garden”

 


And then he’d spit on the ground

 


Shaking his head and looking down

 


That’s what her daddy used to say

 


When he was angry with her

 


I reckon there was a message in there

 


Somewhere

 


 

 


From what I understand he wasn’t her REAL daddy

 


And as it went

 


That girl got out of there

 


She has never even been back to visit

 


At least

 


That’s what I understand

 


 

 


Last time I was out that way

 


I took a walk

 


I saw that ol’ man

 


Amidst his rather barren yard that day

 


An accidental bush with one tiny bud grew

 


In a large expanse of not quite so green grass

 


 

 


That man

 


Was digging up the plant

 


 

 


I said “hello” as I walked up

 


He nodded but didn’t glance my way

 


I watched him work a while

 


And in a bit

 


He looked up with a weary smile

 


He says, “hey-

 


Why don’t you take this plant to my girl?

 


I guarantee you- it would never grow here.”

 


He looked down and spit and shook his head

 


I think he was trying not to cry

 


So was I

 


  


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 Reviews of "Transplant"
Reviewed on March 20, 2008
Ahhh...The intenseness of BLue coming through!
Loving unconditional, the ONE TRUE effort we aspire too!
deeply touching a living story!
written with such an emotion and memories...
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Shexooo

STay Positive!
STay STrong!

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on March 4, 2008
"The minimization effort
To make it all appear otherwise"
This could easily be the premise for a novel Blu Gurl. This story/poem tugs at the heart - the desire to be loved and accepted (honestly and without condition) sometimes is the most elusive thing in life. The rivers in your heart always run deep!
Blessings and love to you ...
Richard


Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 1, 2008
Thank you for sharing this moving account, Blue. This is very compelling. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on March 1, 2008
Amazing isn't strong enough!! Evokes so much thought and emotion. . .what a great storyteller you are. Thank you for posting
this!! 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by J AG
Reviewed on March 1, 2008
imagery, the key that unlocks the door to the garden where everything unseen exists, life brought to a blank page with a key stroke, heart's cry resounding from every line, the beauty in this bittersweet melody brought to us through you. the style and presentation so very impressive. the soul of the piece - astounding. to read this and not be touched, not be changed in some way, is to not have a soul at all. you have more than shown your talent; you have shown your art.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 1, 2008
Blue this is absolutely amazing, the vividness of the images, the sad poignancy of the ages, a parents love, a childs hatred, so many conflicting emotions that from smiling to crying, to anger and finally back to sad longing that somehow this old man and that woman child could find a common ground.Blue I do not know if this is from a real life experience but as a step father who raised to daughters...often not seeing eye to eye but always doing the best I could...this hit close to home. I am lucky my girls grew up to be women who still think of me as their father.

hugs
Fee


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