alright
I’m addicted
out of control with this poetry thing
click click
a new present
a new insight
some dark
some funny
some heartfelt gut wrenching poignant
some love love lovely
there must be some help
for this affliction
everyday I start at the bottom
to make sure I catch all that I can
and back I come
click click
scroll down
looking for a title
that catches my eye
an author who’s past work
has gripped me
alright
I know already
I’m addicted
with poetry affliction
and it’s all your fault
if
you didn’t write such awesome stuff
spellbound matter
if
you didn’t make me laugh
or cry
or think about flies under glasses
or funky cowboy accents
I
could
get
some
work
done
but noooooooo
on and on you go
and trust me the writings on the wall
I’m going to get fired
then
on top of all that
someone’s got to go say
oh you should think about
publishing
yikes
think about it
I long/dream/desire/yearn/would give my first born
for it
scary…….. rejection
is that not the ugliest word in the English language
oh well whatever
I’ve got reading to do
I
need
a
fix
so post away fellow thespians
my vein
is
waiting
Josefina,
Thespians, hmm, would you settle for a true tale lass?
Fun write, I enjoyed. I smile in bowed retreat...
Rodney Evan Bohen
I
need
a
fix
so post away fellow thespians
my vein
is
waiting
Reviewed by Netta Jack (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2003
We suffer from the same addiction. It amazes me how your work mimics mine. Different styles of course but the same story line. I think I have GOT to read everything that you wrote. (Is that the addiction again?)
Reviewed by hOmEr
Reviewed on February 23, 2003
haha, omigosh that was so boring i feel asleep and then my head hit the keybord and after a while a siren came on so i woke up, ahh, that was funny, you should hav been there
Reviewed by Deborah Higgins (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2002
i LOVE the way you think! = )
not to mention the way you write.
keep on!
Reviewed by Kathleen Herrick (Reader)
Reviewed on June 14, 2002
Aha! So come over and visit my pages! Got a fix waiting for ya. >:-)...
Fun poem....rock on.
Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2002
Hehehe jeez it is the story of our lives. But it has also helped me in a lot of ways because now everytime I check my mails, I have posts on my messageboard and letters from fellow AD members. It makes my day and all of a sudden, I ain't lonely nemore!!
Reviewed by Sandy Forbes (Reader)
Reviewed on May 28, 2002
Oh yes, it's addictive, I quite agree
This writing has got the best of me!
Your poetry really grabbed my attention!
It's true, it's funny, what else should I mention?
Oh, I remember, it's talent you've got
Your poetry could certainly take you to the top!
Josie your a wonder....you know we need a fix and you supplied it...how great is that...;-) you are a real winner my dear and don't forget it.!
Reviewed by Gregory Sonn (Reader)
Reviewed on May 28, 2002
Hi Josie,
Hate to burst your bubble but your work is already being published here for all to see and enjoy! You have done well for yourself with your talent. Fear not Horatio there are worse things in heaven and hell. Good enjoyable write. Love the fun! Gregg
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 28, 2002
The OK kind of addiction, at least there's no hangover.
good write......i want to say more but i got alot of reading to do before i post
~~~smile~~~ truly feel ya
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 28, 2002
Oh oh! Its not just me? hmmm should we develop a centre were we can get help? should we get help? I was warned about this vacumn.......of course I knew I would not fall into this trap!........
If only there was a transdermal patch sold at bookstores that I could take to help me with this addiction so I could take my daily dose of prose & verse...You said it sooooo well.
Amor
Reviewed by Matthew Wright (Reader)
Reviewed on May 28, 2002
It is addictive isn't it :o)
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on May 28, 2002
I would love to comment on this but I must hurry to the bottom poems before I miss them
God what if I miss a word it could be a universe in itself waiting for me to discover it.
Click click gotta go
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(((HUGS)))
Sonja
Thespians, hmm, would you settle for a true tale lass?
Fun write, I enjoyed. I smile in bowed retreat...
Rodney Evan Bohen
I
need
a
fix
so post away fellow thespians
my vein
is
waiting
not to mention the way you write.
keep on!
Fun poem....rock on.
This writing has got the best of me!
Your poetry really grabbed my attention!
It's true, it's funny, what else should I mention?
Oh, I remember, it's talent you've got
Your poetry could certainly take you to the top!
Hate to burst your bubble but your work is already being published here for all to see and enjoy! You have done well for yourself with your talent. Fear not Horatio there are worse things in heaven and hell. Good enjoyable write. Love the fun! Gregg
~~~smile~~~ truly feel ya
Wonderful write!
Amor
God what if I miss a word it could be a universe in itself waiting for me to discover it.
Click click gotta go
another poem on the show
debby