My gift came- Out of the misty blue haze of dawn. Slowly swirling scintillatingly close it came. Luckily, I grabbed it before it disappeared;and would slink and sink into the lawn. Deep down, I was afraid. Were I to miss it and lose it to someone else's artsy thoughts...or Would I be dropping by the sight of it- This, I didn't know. So, with a deep breath,I took hold of it and held on to its ethereal form, as best I could. You know- it was worth it. It's done alot of good.
Ken a very surreal poetic twist. Quite mystical. The gift was worth its weight in gold it seems, having triggered a lot of good. Soar with that pen in your hand. I enjoyed very much this piece.
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on October 24, 2008
Our muses dance before us in a mist that reveals just enough - obscures just enough...It is inspiring and frightening. Yes, we want to respond/react and partake quickly lest another might somehow take and mold this inspiration to their own whims and fancies. When we seize the gift, color it, shape it and - most importantly - give it away/share it with others - it is deeply gratifying, indeed!
Mystery man, leaving no ending. To know what it was is mind boggling. But I like your style and this poem about the dawn is showing you are a nature loving person too.
Reviewed by Robin Rice (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2008
Your use of words is careful, deliberate and very thought provoking. thanks for sharing
In "A Touch of Your Presence" are words that would inspire, encourage and strengthen one's soul when faced with challenges and difficulties and to know the awesomeness of God's power.
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I think you've captured some natural fears that writers have, especially in the beginning. Great expression! Live well:)
Sheila
:) shoma
Nice imagery, Ken.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
I like what is left unsaid.
Axilea
Maryvonne
Take care,
Sherry
Regis
love joanne