Love the way you interwove NO to make your point{-s!}. Very effective! As you point out in NO uncertain terms, these are
exceedingly trying times. Historians will say they aren't any scarier than those that humans managed to wade and blow their way through countless times before. But in terms of U.S. history. . .
frankly, I am terrified. We need to turns things around fast --
to h e l p instead of d e s t r o y !! Let's pray -- no, demand --
an end to repressiveness, rampant cronyism, and blatantly stepping
on -- and over -- The Little Guy {/W o m a n, C h i l d -- to seize
and increase and misuse power. See what you have wrought? Can't
stop!! T h a n k y o u for writing about these urgent issues.
For using your talent and passion for the good. I was drawn here
by your bio statement, which is great. W R I T E O N !! Pea <3
I agree with everyone here Karen that this is the silent thoughts we all expressed at the time of the 9/11 attacks. Those attacks in New York city were against civilians without regard for ethnicity. In my opinion only a coward could have set this up. And that picture of Bin Laden, OMG Karen, giggle. Thnx for sharing sis these sad and still painful thoughts. No one could have written it better. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn to a fault, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your sad little den sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."
This one is very dark too, have you tried to stretch this one into an epic? I like it a lot.
Reviewed by Gregory Sonn (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2002
Hi Karen
I know that we talked about this subject and how we feel the same about it. Nice write. We tried getting into chat room, my computer is still messed up. Did you guys get to talk because we could not get in, we tried. Talk to you soon and we will link your site to ours and I will e-mail you with my other information. Sorry I could not get in to chat with you guys, if it worked at all and I will e-mail you with our details.
Hang in there honey, there are good things on the horizon.
Your friend
Gregg
An Excellent Write! A scary, truthful, perfect rendition of what our world has become, After reading this, the picture you posted finally loaded..What a finishing touch!! Sent shivers up my spine and tears to my eyes.. Very well done!!
Thank you,
Jen D.Ensie
Reviewed by Sharon Williamson (Reader)
Reviewed on February 16, 2002
Karen,
This has so much feeling in it. Feelings we can all share. Thank you for sharing this...well done.
Sharon
Reviewed by Tomas Ughdair (Reader)
Reviewed on February 16, 2002
Karen,
Hey lady!Why don't you just lob a couple of grenades back at them,leave the kissing bit to me,(I am really into job satisfaction at the moment)
Morchuis.
Expresses the fear and rage of the 9-11 saga very well, thank you for this piece! Sandi
Reviewed by Sanjay Sonawani (Reader)
Reviewed on February 16, 2002
YOu have worded tth mute agonies of all Americans and of all those who were shocked at those bastardly attacks of 9/11. A sentimental and all compassionate heart of the poet only can express what others can not.
The deep-dive literary meditations presented as stories, poems, and essays in The American Poet Who Went Home Again, A Mosaic of My Soul at Work, have captivated and inspired readers ever since its first paperback publication in 2008.
'Better Without You'is a compelling narrative that explores the complexities of an affair, hidden secrets, and abuse. It also highlights a daughter's heartfelt journey as she cares for her mother who is battling dementia.
exceedingly trying times. Historians will say they aren't any scarier than those that humans managed to wade and blow their way through countless times before. But in terms of U.S. history. . .
frankly, I am terrified. We need to turns things around fast --
to h e l p instead of d e s t r o y !! Let's pray -- no, demand --
an end to repressiveness, rampant cronyism, and blatantly stepping
on -- and over -- The Little Guy {/W o m a n, C h i l d -- to seize
and increase and misuse power. See what you have wrought? Can't
stop!! T h a n k y o u for writing about these urgent issues.
For using your talent and passion for the good. I was drawn here
by your bio statement, which is great. W R I T E O N !! Pea <3
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."
I know that we talked about this subject and how we feel the same about it. Nice write. We tried getting into chat room, my computer is still messed up. Did you guys get to talk because we could not get in, we tried. Talk to you soon and we will link your site to ours and I will e-mail you with my other information. Sorry I could not get in to chat with you guys, if it worked at all and I will e-mail you with our details.
Hang in there honey, there are good things on the horizon.
Your friend
Gregg
Thank you,
Jen D.Ensie
This has so much feeling in it. Feelings we can all share. Thank you for sharing this...well done.
Sharon
Hey lady!Why don't you just lob a couple of grenades back at them,leave the kissing bit to me,(I am really into job satisfaction at the moment)
Morchuis.
A masterpeice!
Thanks for sharing it with us.