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Forgiveness
by Rose Loya → (All Poetry by Rose Loya)
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I think that I'll
give Forgiveness a try,
I'll put down the anger
and what makes one cry,
I'll fold up my reasons
that really mean nothing
when held to Forgiveness
whose shine is like Sun,

the business of revenge and
hatred are cold
they just make my consciense
feel ugly and old
think it's time some makeup
pretties my heart fade-up
this thing called Forgiveness
is late, but on time,

the babies my daughters
used to be live in
my memory, they wander
without and within
more so, lately visions like this
bring up lessons
like Love and Forgiveness
and what they could bring

fortunately, I'll
give Forgiveness a try
while putting down anger
I'll try not to cry
'cause folding up reasons
that really mean nothing
when held to Forgiveness
will shine me like Sun....

fold up those reasons
that really mean nothing,
then hold to Forgiveness
to shine like the Sun...

copyright 2007 Rose Loya 

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 Reviews of "Forgiveness"
Reviewed on September 8, 2007
Your are opening your blosoms to be fully exposed to the sun, and receive so much more warmth, Great write Rose!
Bless! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on July 16, 2007
'cause folding up reasons
that really mean nothing
when held to Forgiveness
will shine me like Sun' ... Beautiful, Rose!
Thank you for sharing such wisdom! Welcome to the Den!
Love, Suzie :-D

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on July 16, 2007
A nice work of thought on the subject of forgiveness...good for the heart and soul...

nice.....

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Fergus Hancock (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2007
To err is human, to forgive, divine.....

There is magic in forgiveness, to let go of resentment, to banish hate to hell where it belongs. Wonderful poem, Rose, that brought a smile to my face at the end of a confronting day, just as the last light of sun touches on the clouds....

Thank you!

Fergus



Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 13, 2007
So much truth and revelation in this write.

Fee

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on July 13, 2007
Forgiveness should be cemented with the notion that you are a unique creation that deserves to be cherished. Our children make the journey so much more enjoyable. I tell my older daughters that you can forgive, but don’t let a guy ever take you down that path again. Know when you deserve better. You can’t save the world. Your advice shines so bright.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on July 13, 2007
And shine you will....nice pen...healthy advice for all of us.


Peace,
Dan


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